Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงประโยคเสริมให้ลื่นไหล นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'let's stay in touch' ควรใช้ 'I use it to stay in touch' แทน

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was about 12 years old because my school required us to do online research for projects. Since then, it has become an important part of my daily life, especially for learning new things and staying in touch with my friends.

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณมีความไม่ชัดเจนและมีคำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหลายคำ ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมกับบริบท

Ví dụ: I usually go online every day, mainly for work and organizing tasks. For example, I check my emails in the morning and use social media platforms to stay connected with friends and family. Additionally, I use the Internet to read news and enjoy entertainment during my free time.

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณมีความสับสนและใช้คำผิดหลายคำ ควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจน พร้อมคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม และให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับสถานการณ์ที่ถูกจำกัดการใช้อินเทอร์เน็ต

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a time about two years ago during my early school years when my parents limited my Internet use. They wanted me to focus more on my studies and outdoor activities. For example, they only allowed me to use the Internet for educational purposes.

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม ควรอธิบายเหตุผลและผลกระทบของการใช้เวลามากเกินไปบนอินเทอร์เน็ต พร้อมทั้งแสดงความพยายามในการปรับปรุง

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on entertainment and social media. For example, I often watch videos and shop with my friends online, which can take up to seven hours a day. However, I am trying to reduce my screen time to improve my daily routine.

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสมกับบริบท

Ví dụ: Without the Internet, I would probably rely more on traditional methods of communication and information, such as reading newspapers or talking face to face with people.

× As I think using the Internet when I was about 12 years old because my school is to do online research for projects.

✓ I think I started using the Internet when I was about 12 years old because my school required us to do online research for projects.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'As I think' and mixes tenses. The phrase 'As I think' is not appropriate here; 'I think' is better. Also, 'my school is to do online research' is incorrect; it should be 'my school required us to do online research' to correctly express the past reason.

× And let's stay in touch with my friends until I find it really useful and convenient.

✓ And I have stayed in touch with my friends because I find it really useful and convenient.

The phrase 'let's stay' is a suggestion and does not fit the context. The sentence should be in present perfect to indicate ongoing action, and 'until' is incorrectly used; 'because' is more appropriate to show reason.

× Ako online research charm abeh mainly for work and organizing, for example, and often ship e-mail in the morning and use social media platform to stay connected with friends and family.

✓ I use the internet mainly for work and organizing, for example, and often check email in the morning and use social media platforms to stay connected with friends and family.

The original sentence contains many nonsensical words and lacks proper sentence structure. Correct verbs and nouns are needed to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Additionally, I brought the Internet for the news and entertainment during my free time.

✓ Additionally, I use the Internet for news and entertainment during my free time.

The verb 'brought' is incorrect here; 'use' is appropriate. Also, 'the news' does not need 'the' in this context, but it is acceptable; the main issue is the verb choice.

× Yes, I can live for a time when I wasn't alarmed 2 years isn't it especially during my early school year, my parents were twice Drake about limiting screen charm to in college near to focus on my kids study and outdoor activities.

✓ Yes, I can remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet, about 2 years ago, especially during my early school years. My parents were strict about limiting screen time to help me focus on my studies and outdoor activities.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors. 'Can live' should be 'can remember'; 'wasn't alarmed' should be 'wasn't allowed'; 'twice Drake' is incorrect and replaced with 'strict'; 'screen charm' should be 'screen time'; 'in college near to focus on my kids study' is incorrect and replaced with 'to help me focus on my studies'.

× For example, they would allow me to use the Internet for education out.

✓ For example, they would allow me to use the Internet for educational purposes.

The phrase 'education out' is incorrect. 'Educational purposes' is the correct phrase to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I do think I spend quite a lot of time online, especially for entertainment and social media.

✓ Yes, I do think I spend quite a lot of time online, especially on entertainment and social media.

The preposition 'for' is less appropriate here; 'on' is better to indicate the activities one spends time on.

× For example, I often find myself to video and shopping with my friends, which can easily check up 7 hours a day.

✓ For example, I often find myself watching videos and shopping with my friends, which can easily take up 7 hours a day.

'Find myself to video and shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'find myself watching videos and shopping'. 'Check up' is incorrect; 'take up' is the correct phrasal verb to indicate time consumption.

× However, I'll try to Berlin but it's 7 minute time so I didn't.

✓ However, I'll try to reduce it, but sometimes I spend up to 7 hours, so I haven't succeeded yet.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical words like 'Berlin' and '7 minute time'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning about trying to reduce time spent online.

× On the Internet I would probably leave more on traditional method of communication and information such as living good this paper or term face to face with people.

✓ Without the Internet, I would probably rely more on traditional methods of communication and information such as reading newspapers or talking face to face with people.

The original sentence has many errors: 'On the Internet' should be 'Without the Internet'; 'leave more on' should be 'rely more on'; 'living good this paper or term' is incorrect and replaced with 'reading newspapers or talking'; 'term face to face' corrected to 'talking face to face'.