Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but needs more natural phrasing and clearer structure. Try to start with a direct answer, then add details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar for clarity.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in the first grade of elementary school because I got my first smartphone then. Although I don't remember exactly what I did online at that time, I really enjoyed exploring it.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats the same idea and has some grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words to make it more coherent.

Ví dụ: I go online every day because I enjoy watching YouTube videos and reading eBooks. Therefore, the internet is a big part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammar errors. Try to answer directly, then explain with clear supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a time in high school when we were not allowed to use gadgets during weekdays at school. We could only use them on weekends, which helped me focus on my studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific details and reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I don't think I spend too much time online because I usually use the internet for about three hours a day, which I believe is a reasonable amount of time.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and more natural language. Start with a direct answer, then add specific examples using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar.

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend my time hiking or reading books. I believe there are many enjoyable activities to do without the internet, such as going on trips.

× Well, because I had my first smartphone at elementary school, 1st grade, I started Internet that time and I can't remember what did I do that time, but I really enjoyed doing Internet.

✓ Well, because I had my first smartphone in elementary school, 1st grade, I started using the Internet at that time and I can't remember what I did then, but I really enjoyed using the Internet.

The sentence has past tense errors and incorrect verb forms. 'Started Internet' should be 'started using the Internet' to correctly express the action. 'What did I do' is incorrect in indirect question form; it should be 'what I did'. Also, 'doing Internet' is incorrect; 'using the Internet' is proper. Use past tense consistently for past events.

× Well, because I had my first smartphone at elementary school, 1st grade, I started Internet that time and I can't remember what did I do that time, but I really enjoyed doing Internet.

✓ Well, because I had my first smartphone in elementary school, 1st grade, I started using the Internet at that time and I can't remember what I did then, but I really enjoyed using the Internet.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'elementary school'; 'in elementary school' is correct. Also, 'that time' should be 'at that time' or 'then' for clarity.

× Well, because I had my first smartphone at elementary school, 1st grade, I started Internet that time and I can't remember what did I do that time, but I really enjoyed doing Internet.

✓ Well, because I had my first smartphone in elementary school, 1st grade, I started using the Internet at that time and I can't remember what I did then, but I really enjoyed using the Internet.

The verb 'start' is followed by a gerund when indicating beginning an activity, so 'started using' is correct. Also, 'doing Internet' is incorrect; 'using the Internet' is the proper collocation.

× Well, I go every day to the Internet because my pursuit is watching YouTube or reading ebook. So I most often I go Internet every day.

✓ Well, I go online every day because my main activities are watching YouTube or reading ebooks. So, I usually go online every day.

The phrase 'go to the Internet' is unnatural; 'go online' is the correct expression. Also, 'reading ebook' should be 'reading ebooks' (plural). 'Most often I go Internet' is incorrect; 'I usually go online' is better.

× Well, I go every day to the Internet because my pursuit is watching YouTube or reading ebook. So I most often I go Internet every day.

✓ Well, I go online every day because my main activities are watching YouTube or reading ebooks. So, I usually go online every day.

The word 'ebook' should be plural 'ebooks' because it refers to multiple reading materials. Also, 'pursuit' is awkward here; 'main activities' is clearer.

× Well ah yeah I have. When I was in high school my school didn't allowed for me to use gadget at school and we opened all for about in the weekdays and we received it in the weekend.

✓ Well, yes I have. When I was in high school, my school didn't allow me to use gadgets at school. We had to hand them in during the weekdays and we received them back on the weekend.

'Didn't allowed for me' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't allow me'. 'Use gadget' should be 'use gadgets' (plural). 'Opened all for about in the weekdays' is unclear; corrected to 'had to hand them in during the weekdays'. 'Received it in the weekend' should be 'received them back on the weekend'.

× Well ah yeah I have. When I was in high school my school didn't allowed for me to use gadget at school and we opened all for about in the weekdays and we received it in the weekend.

✓ Well, yes I have. When I was in high school, my school didn't allow me to use gadgets at school. We had to hand them in during the weekdays and we received them back on the weekend.

'Gadget' should be plural 'gadgets' because it refers to devices in general. Also, pronouns referring to gadgets should be plural 'them'.

× Well I don't think so because I use Internet for about 3-3 hours in a day and I think it's just exact to exact time and. I think Internet.

✓ Well, I don't think so because I use the Internet for about 3 hours a day and I think that's just the right amount of time. I think the Internet is useful.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Use Internet' should be 'use the Internet'. '3-3 hours' is unclear; corrected to '3 hours'. The phrase 'just exact to exact time' is awkward; replaced with 'just the right amount of time'. Added clarity to the last sentence.

× Well I don't think so because I use Internet for about 3-3 hours in a day and I think it's just exact to exact time and. I think Internet.

✓ Well, I don't think so because I use the Internet for about 3 hours a day and I think that's just the right amount of time. I think the Internet is useful.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the service. Missing 'the' before 'Internet' is incorrect.

× Well, I used to go hiking or read books because I think I believe that I can live without the Internet and there is a lot of things to do without Internet and I can go trip.

✓ Well, I would go hiking or read books because I believe that I can live without the Internet. There are a lot of things to do without the Internet, and I can go on trips.

'Used to' is acceptable but 'would' fits better for hypothetical past actions. 'I think I believe' is redundant; 'I believe' is sufficient. 'There is a lot of things' should be 'There are a lot of things' (plural agreement). 'Without Internet' needs 'the'. 'Go trip' should be 'go on trips'.