Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was very young because my parents introduced me to educational games online to help with my studies.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I spent about two hours a day on the internet because I was busy with school. Now, I use it every day for my job.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc tốt hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember that during tests or exams at school, my parents would lock my computer because they wanted me to focus on my studies and homework.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên nói rõ ý kiến và giải thích một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think I spend too much time online because I am aware of its effects. For example, it can harm my eyes and cause back pain if I sit for too long.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: If I couldn't use the internet, I would do many other activities like walking around my neighborhood, riding my motorcycle, or drinking coffee while observing my surroundings.

× I began using the Internet was I very young?

✓ I began using the Internet when I was very young.

The original sentence incorrectly combines two clauses without proper conjunction or structure. The correct form uses 'when' to introduce the time clause, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× my parents introduced me to use this for my education through educational game online.

✓ my parents introduced me to using it for my education through online educational games.

The verb 'introduced' should be followed by a gerund ('using') rather than an infinitive ('to use'). Also, 'educational game online' should be plural and reordered to 'online educational games' for natural English.

× I spent time for Internet about 2-2 hours a day because I study school so no have time for this.

✓ I spent about 2 hours a day on the Internet because I was studying at school, so I didn't have time for it.

The phrase 'spent time for Internet' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the Internet'. Also, 'study school' should be 'was studying at school' to indicate past continuous tense. 'No have time' should be 'didn't have time' for correct negation and tense.

× Now I'm older I use this for my job every day.

✓ Now that I'm older, I use it for my job every day.

Adding 'that' after 'Now' clarifies the sentence. Also, 'this' is better replaced with 'it' to refer back to the Internet naturally.

× Of course exactly when I have a test or exam in my school, my parents will lock lock my computer.

✓ Of course, exactly when I had a test or exam at my school, my parents would lock my computer.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so past tense 'had' and conditional 'would lock' are appropriate. Also, 'lock lock' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'lock'. 'In my school' should be 'at my school'.

× Yes, they just want I focus on my school and homework.

✓ Yes, they just want me to focus on my school and homework.

After 'want', the object pronoun 'me' and the infinitive 'to focus' are required. 'I focus' is incorrect in this context.

× No, I didn't, because I know the I know the effect of computer affect it.

✓ No, I don't, because I know the effect computers have on me.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should be in present tense 'don't'. The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical; 'the effect of computer affect it' is incorrect. The correction clarifies meaning and uses proper subject-verb agreement.

× To me it's not good for my eyes and if I sit a long time, so my back is very hot and it's not good.

✓ To me, it's not good for my eyes, and if I sit for a long time, my back feels very hot, which is not good.

'Sit a long time' needs the preposition 'for'. 'My back is very hot' is unnatural; 'my back feels very hot' is better. The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary and replaced with a comma and 'which' for clarity.

× If I cannot use Internet, I have many.

✓ If I cannot use the Internet, I have many activities to do.

The sentence is incomplete; 'I have many' what? Adding 'activities to do' completes the thought. Also, 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I have many activities to do like as walking around my street, ride motorcycle or just drink coffee and see everything around me.

✓ I have many activities to do, like walking around my street, riding my motorcycle, or just drinking coffee and seeing everything around me.

The phrase 'like as' is incorrect; 'like' alone is sufficient. The verbs after 'like' should be in gerund form to maintain parallel structure. Also, 'ride motorcycle' should be 'riding my motorcycle' for possessive clarity.