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Part 1

Giám khảo

When did you start using the internet?

Thí sinh

I started using the Internet when I was around 10 years old, meaning to watch cartoons and play computer games.

Giám khảo

How often do you go online?

Thí sinh

I go online several times a day, usually to check messages, watch videos or look up information.

Giám khảo

Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was around 11 years old, one day after school I wanted to play computer games but my mom said I should finish my homework first so she didn't allowed me to go online.

Giám khảo

Do you think you spend too much time online?

Thí sinh

Yes, sometimes I feel I spend too much time online, especially when I played computer games without noticing the time.

Giám khảo

What would you do without the internet?

Thí sinh

Without the Internet, I think I would read more books, go outside more often, and maybe spend more time with my family.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

When did you start using the internet?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但“meaning to watch cartoons and play computer games”表达不够地道,建议用更自然的表达方式,如“mainly to watch cartoons and play computer games”。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was around 10 years old, mainly to watch cartoons and play computer games.

How often do you go online?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,内容具体且自然。可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯,例如“usually to check messages, watch videos, or look up information.”

Ví dụ: I go online several times a day, usually to check messages, watch videos, or look up information.

Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误,“didn't allowed”应为“didn't allow”。建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was about 11 years old, one day after school I wanted to play computer games, but my mom said I had to finish my homework first, so she didn't allow me to go online.

Do you think you spend too much time online?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 时态使用不一致,“played”应改为“play”。建议使用连接词使句子更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I feel I spend too much time online, especially when I play computer games and lose track of time.

What would you do without the internet?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容丰富。可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Without the Internet, I think I would read more books, go outside more often, and maybe spend more time with my family.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× ...so she didn't allowed me to go online.

...so she didn't allow me to go online.

这里使用了助动词'did',后面的动词应该用原形'allow',而不是过去式'allowed'。在英语中,助动词'did'后面动词保持原形。

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