Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use simple and clear sentences, and directly answer the question with relevant details. For example, mention the age or period you started using the internet and what you mainly use it for.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was a teenager, after I finished revising the Quran. I usually use it to connect with my friends and watch videos related to video games.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and complete answer with linking words to explain how you use the internet and its benefits.

Ví dụ: I go online every day, mainly to study. It helps me improve my language skills and deepen my knowledge in science, which is very useful for my education.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by linking ideas and using more precise vocabulary. Also, clarify the connection between internet use and video games.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember two years ago when my father didn't allow me to use the internet for playing video games because it was damaging my eyes and affecting my health.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific details.

Ví dụ: Actually, yes, I think I spend too much time online because I study for long periods, usually around 5 to 6 hours, and I often lose track of time.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words. Provide a clear opinion and explain how you adapt without the internet with specific examples.

Ví dụ: From my perspective, living without the internet is normal. For example, when my phone was broken for two or three months, I adapted well and found it beneficial to focus on other activities.

× I started analyzing Internet when when I finished my revision for the Quran when I was a teenage.

✓ I started analyzing the Internet when I finished my revision for the Quran when I was a teenager.

The word 'teenage' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'teenager' to correctly refer to a person in their teenage years. Also, 'Internet' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' because it is a specific entity.

× I started analyzing Internet when when I finished my revision for the Quran when I was a teenage.

✓ I started analyzing the Internet when I finished my revision for the Quran when I was a teenager.

The word 'Internet' is a unique noun and requires the definite article 'the' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I often use it to connect with friends and watch video games.

✓ I often use it to connect with friends and watch videos games.

The phrase 'video games' is plural, so 'watch video games' is correct. However, 'watch video games' is unusual; typically, one 'plays' video games rather than 'watches' them. But since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, the plural form 'video games' is correct as is.

× I primary use it to to study and it helps me to to improve my language skills and enhance my my educational science.

✓ I primarily use it to study and it helps me to improve my language skills and enhance my educational science.

The adverb 'primarily' is the correct form instead of 'primary' to modify the verb 'use'. Also, the repeated words 'to to' and 'my my' are errors and should be corrected to single instances.

× I primary use it to to study and it helps me to to improve my language skills and enhance my my educational science.

✓ I primarily use it to study and it helps me to improve my language skills and enhance my educational science.

The phrase 'educational science' is unclear and may need clarification, but grammatically, 'my educational science' is acceptable if referring to the subject or knowledge area. The repeated words are errors and should be removed.

× It it helps me also to.

✓ It also helps me.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× Yeah, I remember that time two years ago, my father was not allowing me to use PlayStation or video games because it was damaging my eye and harming my overall health.

✓ Yeah, I remember that time two years ago, my father did not allow me to use the PlayStation or play video games because it was damaging my eyes and harming my overall health.

The past continuous 'was not allowing' is incorrect here; the simple past 'did not allow' is appropriate. 'PlayStation' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific device. 'Video games' are played, not used. 'Eye' should be plural 'eyes' as humans have two eyes.

× Yeah, I remember that time two years ago, my father was not allowing me to use PlayStation or video games because it was damaging my eye and harming my overall health.

✓ Yeah, I remember that time two years ago, my father did not allow me to use the PlayStation or play video games because it was damaging my eyes and harming my overall health.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'PlayStation' because it refers to a specific device.

× Actually, yes I do 'cause I use it to study for a long a long period of time and do not notice about the time I I usually sit for 5-6 hours, that's why.

✓ Actually, yes I do because I use it to study for a long period of time and do not notice the time. I usually sit for 5-6 hours, that's why.

The phrase 'do not notice about the time' is incorrect; it should be 'do not notice the time'. The repeated words 'a long a long' and 'I I' are errors and should be removed. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because'.

× Actually, yes I do 'cause I use it to study for a long a long period of time and do not notice about the time I I usually sit for 5-6 hours, that's why.

✓ Actually, yes I do because I use it to study for a long period of time and do not notice the time. I usually sit for 5-6 hours, that's why.

The phrase 'a long period of time' is correct with the indefinite article 'a'. The repeated 'a long' is an error and should be removed.

× Actually, yes I do 'cause I use it to study for a long a long period of time and do not notice about the time I I usually sit for 5-6 hours, that's why.

✓ Actually, yes I do because I use it to study for a long period of time and do not notice the time. I usually sit for 5-6 hours, that's why.

The conjunction 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for proper grammar.

× From my perspective, I I would say it's normal.

✓ From my perspective, I would say it's normal.

The repeated pronoun 'I I' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× I think because I remember the time my phone was broken and I left without phone for two or three months.

✓ I think because I remember the time my phone was broken and I was without a phone for two or three months.

The phrase 'left without phone' is incorrect; it should be 'was without a phone'. The indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'phone'.

× So I think it's normal and I can adapt myself on this situation.

✓ So I think it's normal and I can adapt myself to this situation.

The correct preposition after 'adapt' is 'to', not 'on'. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is correctly used here.

× So I think it's normal and I can adapt myself on this situation.

✓ So I think it's normal and I can adapt myself to this situation.

The verb 'adapt' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'on'.