Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by removing redundant phrases and correcting grammar.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet in high school to help me complete my assignments and research academic topics.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and complete your sentences fully for coherence.

Ví dụ: I go online whenever I need to search for information, especially for my assignments or academic research.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a meeting when my boss told us not to use the internet because many important officials, including our senior manager, were present.

Gợi ý: Your answer is contradictory and unclear. Make sure your statements are consistent and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: No, I don't spend too much time online because I have a hectic schedule and try to avoid distractions from the internet both at work and at home.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use clear and concise sentences with appropriate vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: I can't imagine life without the internet because technology is advancing rapidly and most things are digital nowadays.

× I start using Internet when I was in high school.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in high school.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the time frame. Also, 'Internet' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' as it is a specific noun.

× I start using Internet when I was in high school.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in high school.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific, unique entity.

× I was I was browsing the net for Internet for my academic.

✓ I was browsing the net on the Internet for my academic work.

The phrase 'for Internet for my academic' is unclear and incorrect. 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the' and 'academic' should be followed by a noun like 'work' to complete the meaning.

× I was I was browsing the net for Internet for my academic.

✓ I was browsing the net on the Internet for my academic work.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used before 'Internet'; 'on the Internet' is the correct phrase. Also, 'for my academic' is incomplete; it should be 'for my academic work'.

× I think whenever I I want to search something then I go online.

✓ I think whenever I want to search for something, I go online.

The verb 'search' is usually followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating the object of the search. Also, the sentence is in present tense and should be clear and concise.

× if I want to search anything for my, for my assignment or for anything for research on academic.

✓ if I want to search for anything for my assignment or for research on academics.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' before its object. Also, 'research on academic' should be 'research on academics' or 'academic research' for clarity.

× I was not allowed to use the Internet.

✓ I was not allowed to use the Internet.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× there were so many official authorities are there and our our big boss is there, so I was not allowed.

✓ there were so many official authorities and our big boss was there, so I was not allowed.

The sentence mixes present and past tense verbs incorrectly. 'Are' and 'is' should be changed to 'were' and 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, repeated words like 'our our' should be corrected.

× I spent too much time online because I have a very hectic schedule so I try to avoid the Internet and it also.

✓ I don't spend too much time online because I have a very hectic schedule, so I try to avoid the Internet.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'spent' when referring to a habitual action. Present tense 'don't spend' is appropriate here. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be concise.

× I used too much Internet when I was at work or when I was when I am home so.

✓ I don't use the Internet too much when I am at work or when I am at home.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and has redundant phrases. Consistent present tense and proper pronoun use improve clarity.

× I didn't did not even think about a life without Internet because right nowadays technology is very in technology is increasing day by day.

✓ I didn't even think about life without the Internet because nowadays technology is increasing day by day.

The phrase 'didn't did not' is redundant; only one negative auxiliary is needed. Also, 'a life' should be 'life' in this context, and 'the Internet' requires the definite article. The phrase 'very in technology' is incorrect and removed for clarity.

× I cannot live without Internet.

✓ I cannot live without the Internet.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific, unique entity.