Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was about 9 or 10 years old, back when I was in primary school.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议避免重复表达，句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: I go online every day, actually almost every hour.

Gợi ý: 句子结构复杂且语法错误较多，建议分句表达，注意时态和语法的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember when I was a child, my mother forbade me from using the internet because she thought I would spend too much time playing games.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不准确，句子较长且有些重复，建议使用现在时并简化表达。

Ví dụ: Actually, no. I don't think I spend too much time online because I use it mainly to chat with friends on WeChat and to look for information or read articles.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，词汇使用不当，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

Ví dụ: Without the internet, I would spend time playing with my pets. It would be a relaxing and enjoyable way to feel their love and companionship.

× I started to use Internet at my childhood as like 9 or 10 years old when I was a pupil in a primary school.

✓ I started to use the Internet in my childhood when I was about 9 or 10 years old and a pupil in primary school.

“Internet”前面需要加定冠词“the”，表示特指互联网。句中“at my childhood”应改为“in my childhood”，因为“childhood”是一个时间段，使用介词“in”。“as like”用法错误，应改为“when I was about 9 or 10 years old”。

× I started to use Internet at my childhood as like 9 or 10 years old when I was a pupil in a primary school.

✓ I started to use the Internet in my childhood when I was about 9 or 10 years old and a pupil in primary school.

“at my childhood”中的介词“at”用法不当，表示时间段应使用“in”。

× I started to use Internet at my childhood as like 9 or 10 years old when I was a pupil in a primary school.

✓ I started to use the Internet in my childhood when I was about 9 or 10 years old and a pupil in primary school.

“as like”是错误搭配，应使用“about”表示大约年龄。

× Well, nowadays I go on go online like every day or precisely it's almost every hour.

✓ Well, nowadays I go online almost every day, or more precisely, almost every hour.

“go on go online”重复且错误，应简化为“go online”。“like every day”中“like”用法不当，应去掉或改为“almost”。

× Yes, I can still remember when I was a child, during my studied life, my mother forbade me to use the Internet because she think she thought I cannot help myself to play games through the Internet at that time.

✓ Yes, I can still remember when I was a child, during my study life, my mother forbade me to use the Internet because she thought I could not help myself playing games on the Internet at that time.

“studied life”应为“study life”或更自然的表达。动词时态应保持一致，“she think”应为过去时“she thought”。“cannot help myself to play”结构错误，应为“could not help myself playing”。

× Yes, I can still remember when I was a child, during my studied life, my mother forbade me to use the Internet because she think she thought I cannot help myself to play games through the Internet at that time.

✓ Yes, I can still remember when I was a child, during my study life, my mother forbade me to use the Internet because she thought I could not help myself playing games on the Internet at that time.

“play games through the Internet”中介词“through”用法不当，应改为“on the Internet”。

× Actually, no, I don't think I spent too much time online because nowadays I have to use the Internet to communicate with my friends on WeChat and sometimes I have to search some information or read some articles on the Internet.

✓ Actually, no, I don't think I spend too much time online because nowadays I have to use the Internet to communicate with my friends on WeChat and sometimes I have to search for some information or read some articles on the Internet.

“I don't think I spent”时态不一致，应为现在时“I don't think I spend”，因为后文提到“nowadays”。“search some information”应为“search for some information”，动词“search”后需加介词“for”。

× Actually, no, I don't think I spent too much time online because nowadays I have to use the Internet to communicate with my friends on WeChat and sometimes I have to search some information or read some articles on the Internet.

✓ Actually, no, I don't think I spend too much time online because nowadays I have to use the Internet to communicate with my friends on WeChat and sometimes I have to search for some information or read some articles on the Internet.

动词“search”后应加介词“for”，表示“搜索某些信息”。

× Well, I'd like to play with my pets and enjoy their outcome accompany, uh, without the Internet.

✓ Well, I'd like to play with my pets and enjoy their company, uh, without the Internet.

“outcome accompany”词组错误，应为“company”，表示“陪伴”。

× And I think it it's really an enjoyable time for me to relax myself and feel their love to me.

✓ And I think it's really an enjoyable time for me to relax and feel their love for me.

“it it's”重复，应删去一个“it”。“relax myself”表达不自然，通常说“relax”。“feel their love to me”应为“feel their love for me”，介词用法错误。