Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and coherent answer by avoiding unclear phrases and focusing on the main point. Use simple and correct sentences to explain when you started using the internet and for what purpose. Avoid redundant or confusing words.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in middle school. At that time, I mainly used it to find school resources and learn how to navigate websites.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by correcting grammar mistakes and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about your online activities.

Ví dụ: I go online every day because I work from home, and most of my tasks are internet-based. Besides work, I manage my social media accounts, so being online has become a normal part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Focus on answering the question directly by recalling a specific time when you were not allowed to use the internet. Use clear and simple sentences and avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I remember when I was a child, we did not have internet at home, so I was not allowed to use it. Instead, I used to play with my neighbors and do other activities.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain your opinion and give examples of your online activities.

Ví dụ: Yes, I go online every day. I use the internet to find information for learning. In my free time, I visit Facebook to contact my friends or watch movies on YouTube.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer sentences. Provide specific examples of offline activities you would do without the internet.

Ví dụ: I use the internet to communicate with my friends and family, especially for work and studying. Without the internet, I would focus more on offline activities like reading books, learning new skills, or playing musical instruments.

× Around the ears of two will err thought in.

✓ Around the years of 2002.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words and tense usage. The phrase 'ears of two will err thought in' seems to be a mishearing or misspelling. The correct phrase should refer to a time period in the past, such as 'Around the years of 2002.' This correction uses the past tense appropriately to indicate a time in the past.

× Back then it was mostly for school resource and learning how to.

✓ Back then it was mostly for school resources and learning how to use it.

The original sentence uses 'resource' in singular form and ends abruptly with 'learning how to.' The correct preposition and plural form should be used: 'school resources.' Also, the phrase 'learning how to' needs an object to complete the meaning, such as 'learning how to use it.'

× So how to nae Navy gate website?

✓ So how to navigate websites?

The original sentence contains misspelled words and incorrect pronouns. 'Nae Navy gate' is a mishearing of 'navigate.' The sentence should be corrected to 'So how to navigate websites?' to make sense and use correct pronouns and vocabulary.

× Apart from work I also have social media account that I manage which require me to be online regularly.

✓ Apart from work, I also have social media accounts that I manage which require me to be online regularly.

The original sentence uses 'account' in singular form but refers to multiple accounts implicitly. The verb 'require' agrees with plural 'accounts.' Therefore, 'accounts' should be plural to match the verb and meaning.

× It become a normal part of my daily routine.

✓ It has become a normal part of my daily routine.

The verb 'become' is incorrectly used in base form. The present perfect tense 'has become' is appropriate here to indicate a change that has occurred up to now.

× Nowadays the Internet with many benefits, benefit and some drawback is becoming popular all over the world.

✓ Nowadays the Internet, with many benefits and some drawbacks, is becoming popular all over the world.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'benefit' in singular form after 'many benefits' and 'drawback' in singular form. Both should be plural to match the context. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× In that time we have not phone or dis type of Internet, we are. Playing with each neighborhood and making.

✓ At that time, we did not have phones or this type of Internet; we were playing with each other in the neighborhood and making things.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'We have not phone' should be 'we did not have phones.' 'Dis' should be 'this.' 'We are playing' should be past tense 'we were playing.' Also, 'each neighborhood' is corrected to 'each other in the neighborhood' for clarity.

× Delicieux thing.

✓ Delicious things.

The phrase 'Delicieux thing' is incorrect. 'Delicieux' is a misspelling of 'delicious,' and 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of multiple activities or items.

× Will I go online every day?

✓ I go online every day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Will' to ask a question when the statement is affirmative. The correct form is a simple present statement 'I go online every day.'

× I ask is the Internet to find informations when learning.

✓ I use the Internet to find information when learning.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'ask' instead of 'use' and 'informations' which is uncountable and should be 'information.' The corrected sentence uses the correct verb and uncountable noun.

× When I have free time I go online Facebook to contact my friend or watch movies on a YouTube.

✓ When I have free time, I go online to Facebook to contact my friends or watch movies on YouTube.

The sentence misses the preposition 'to' before 'Facebook' and incorrectly uses 'a YouTube.' 'YouTube' is a proper noun and does not need an article. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× I use the Internet for communicating with my friends and my family members and specially for work and is studying.

✓ I use the Internet for communicating with my friends and family members, especially for work and studying.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'specially' instead of 'especially' and 'is studying' which should be 'studying.' Also, 'my family members' is fine but 'my' can be omitted for smoother flow.

× Without the Internet I will likely focus on offline activities.

✓ Without the Internet, I would likely focus on offline activities.

The sentence uses 'will' which indicates certainty about the future. 'Would' is more appropriate here to express a hypothetical situation.

× I did spend more time reading books or learning or musical.

✓ I would spend more time reading books or learning music.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'did spend' which is emphatic past tense but contextually 'would spend' fits better to express habitual past action. Also, 'learning or musical' is incorrect; it should be 'learning music.'