Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более связным и естественным. Избегайте незавершённых предложений и повторений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и добавьте конкретные детали.

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was seven years old, around the same time I got my first phone. It was a great experience because it opened up new ways for me to learn and communicate.

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком фрагментирован и содержит много пауз. Следует объединять предложения, использовать связующие слова и избегать повторений.

Ví dụ: I go online every day because I like to chat with my friends and parents. Besides that, I play online games, surf the Internet, and check social media regularly.

Gợi ý: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать более чёткие и полные предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because I had disagreements with my parents. They took my phone away, and I tried everything to get it back.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и незавершённые предложения. Следует использовать правильные времена и связные фразы.

Ví dụ: If you had asked me three years ago, I would have said yes. However, now I don't think I spend too much time online because I mainly use it for studying and try to limit my usage.

Gợi ý: Ответ достаточно хороший, но можно сделать его более плавным и связным, избегая пауз и добавляя связующие слова.

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the Internet, I would read books, paint, play my favorite sport, tennis, or go for a walk with my parents or friends.

× I. And the same way which I had my first phone at the time I started to use Internet and it was a great experience.

✓ In the same way, I had my first phone at the time I started to use the Internet, and it was a great experience.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'I.' is incomplete and 'the same way which' is awkward. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence using proper conjunctions and articles.

× I go on line every day because I always. Chat with my friends and with my parents.

✓ I go online every day because I always chat with my friends and my parents.

The phrase 'go on line' should be 'go online' as one word. Also, the sentence was fragmented; combining the parts improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Also I play online games and. I'm surfing the Internet and. I look for social media too.

✓ Also, I play online games, surf the Internet, and look at social media too.

The original sentences are fragmented and repetitive. Combining them into one sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms improves flow and correctness.

× Yes, I remember the times it was when I had disagreements with my parents and the UM. Got my phone and then I tried her everything to get my phone back and.

✓ Yes, I remember the times when I had disagreements with my parents and they took my phone. Then I tried everything to get my phone back.

'UM. Got my phone' is unclear and 'tried her everything' is incorrect pronoun usage. Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing are used in the correction.

× If you asked that question three years ago, I'll I'd say yes, but now I don't think so.

✓ If you had asked that question three years ago, I would have said yes, but now I don't think so.

The original mixes tenses and modal verbs incorrectly. The correction uses the correct past perfect conditional structure for hypothetical past situations.

× I usually use the Internet for study and I try. Everything not to use it a lot.

✓ I usually use the Internet for studying and I try not to use it too much.

'For study' should be 'for studying' to use the gerund form. 'Try everything not to use it a lot' is awkward; rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Oh, I've had a situations like that.

✓ Oh, I've had situations like that.

'A situations' is incorrect because 'situations' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The article is removed to match the plural noun.