Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“started using the Internet is in my primary school”应改为“started using the Internet when I was in primary school”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was in primary school. I remember getting my first cell phone at that time, which allowed me to access the Internet.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“like to scrolling”应为“like to scroll”，且表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的动词形式，避免重复“almost all the time”，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I use the Internet almost all the time because I like to scroll through social media apps like TikTok and Twitter. Besides that, I often chat with my friends online to share interesting things from my daily life.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，正确使用冠词和介词，避免拼写错误，并且句子结构应更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in high school, my school did not allow students to bring or use cell phones on campus. Also, during important exams in China, students are not allowed to use the Internet.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“bruising some news”应为“browsing some news”，且句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的词汇，简洁表达，并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Definitely. When I get up, I start using the Internet to browse the news and check messages from my friends. Besides that, I often stay up late watching TV dramas online.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“do reading some books”应为“read some books”，且表达不够连贯。建议简化句子，使用正确的动词形式，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I haven't thought about it much, but if I didn't have the Internet, I would read some books. I might also go to the gym to run or swim, or just go to work.

× Well to be honest, I started using the Internet is in my primary school and I remembered in that time I have my first cell phone.

✓ Well to be honest, I started using the Internet in my primary school and I remember at that time I had my first cell phone.

句子中时态使用不正确。'started'后不应接'is'，应直接接时间状语。'remembered'应改为一般现在时'remember'，因为记忆是现在仍然存在的事实。'have'应改为过去时'had'，因为描述的是过去的情况。

× Oh well, actually I use the Internet almost all the time because I like to scrolling the social media app like the TikTok and Twitter.

✓ Oh well, actually I use the Internet almost all the time because I like scrolling the social media apps like TikTok and Twitter.

动词'like'后接动名词形式，不能用不定式'to scrolling'，应改为'like scrolling'。

× Oh well, actually I use the Internet almost all the time because I like to scrolling the social media app like the TikTok and Twitter.

✓ Oh well, actually I use the Internet almost all the time because I like scrolling social media apps like TikTok and Twitter.

'app'应使用复数形式'apps'，因为后面列举了多个应用。

× Yes, to be honest uh when I was in high school, my school don't allow student to use an bring 0 cell phones in school so I cannot use it in my campus more than that.

✓ Yes, to be honest, when I was in high school, my school didn't allow students to bring or use cell phones in school, so I could not use them on campus. Moreover,

'don't'应改为过去时'didn't'，'student'应为复数'students'，'an bring 0 cell phones'表达不正确，应改为'bring or use cell phones'，'it'指代不明确，应改为'them'指代复数的手机。

× In China some important exam is not allowed students to use your.

✓ In China, during some important exams, students are not allowed to use their phones.

句子结构混乱，'exam'应为复数'exams'，'is not allowed students'语序错误，应为'students are not allowed'，'your'用词错误，应为'their phones'。

× Definitely, I mean well, I get up, I began to use the Internet, I want to bruising some news and I will check what messages did my friend sent to me.

✓ Definitely, I mean well, I get up, I begin to use the Internet, I want to browse some news and I check what messages my friend sent to me.

时态混用，'began'应改为一般现在时'begin'，因为描述的是习惯动作。'bruising'拼写错误，应为'browse'。'did my friend sent'语序错误，应为'my friend sent'。

× More than that, I think I like to stay up late for watching some TV dramas.

✓ Moreover, I think I like to stay up late watching some TV dramas.

'for watching'用法错误，'like to stay up late watching'更自然，'more than that'改为'moreover'更符合书面表达。

× Well to be honest I have not thought about it but I think if I don't have the Internet I will do reading some books or just when I go to the gym, running or swimming or just to go for work.

✓ Well to be honest, I have not thought about it, but I think if I don't have the Internet, I will read some books or just go to the gym, run or swim, or just go to work.

'do reading'错误，'do'后应接动词原形或名词，改为'read'。'just when I go to the gym, running or swimming'结构混乱，应改为'just go to the gym, run or swim'。'just to go for work'应改为'just go to work'。