Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，使用完整句子，并且避免重复和不连贯的表达。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was 10 years old because we had computer lessons in elementary school. Each class lasted about one hour, and I found it very interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性，句子断断续续且含糊不清。建议使用完整句子，明确表达上网频率和原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually go online for about six to eight hours a day because I use my laptop to study English and do other schoolwork.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，清晰表达禁止上网的时间和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember when I was in elementary school, I wasn't allowed to use the internet after 10:00 PM because I needed to go to bed early to prepare for school.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清，句子不完整且含糊。建议明确说明上网时间的用途，使用完整句子，并避免重复和无意义的词汇。

Ví dụ: Not really, because I usually spend time online doing research for important things, not just for entertainment. I also use the internet to improve my English skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述没有互联网时的替代方案，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the internet, I would ask someone for help, look up information in physical books at the library, or discuss with others to get important information for my studies.

× I start using the Internet when I was 10 years old.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was 10 years old.

这里描述的是过去发生的动作，应该使用过去时态。动词start需要用过去式started。

× That we had computer lesson in element in elementary school.

✓ We had computer lessons in elementary school.

句子结构不完整且有多余词汇，应该简化为完整的陈述句。element是多余且错误的词。

× About one hour classes.

✓ About one-hour classes.

这里需要用复合形容词one-hour修饰classes，且classes应为复数。

× And that is interesting.

✓ And that was interesting.

描述过去的经历，时态应与上下文一致，使用过去时was。

× I usually browse. The website about.

✓ I usually browse websites.

句子不完整，browse后应直接跟宾语websites，且不需要句号断开。

× The website about.

✓ Websites about...

website应为复数websites，且句子不完整，需补充内容。

× A6 or 8 hours 6 to 8 hours per day because I use.

✓ I use the internet 6 to 8 hours per day because I use...

句子结构混乱，需调整顺序使其完整通顺。

× My laptop to study English to study outs.

✓ my laptop to study English and other subjects.

句子不完整且“outs”不明确，应改为“other subjects”或类似表达。

× And now?

✓ And now?

此句为口语简短问句，无语法错误。

× I cannot. I couldn't use Internet.

✓ I couldn't use the Internet.

前半句“I cannot”不符合过去时态，应删除或改为过去时。后半句正确。

× I couldn't use Internet.

✓ I couldn't use the Internet.

Internet前需要加定冠词the。

× I could. I couldn't use computer after 10:00 PM because I need to go to bed early.

✓ I couldn't use the computer after 10:00 PM because I needed to go to bed early.

描述过去的习惯，动词需用过去时couldn't和needed。

× I couldn't use computer after 10:00 PM

✓ I couldn't use the computer after 10:00 PM

computer前需要加定冠词the。

× Force that for ready for getting ready stud.

✓ I was forced to get ready for studying.

句子结构混乱，需调整为正确表达。

× Not really because I usually do research online for.

✓ Not really, because I usually do research online for...

句子不完整，需补充内容或调整结构。

× Almost 4 important things not for entertainment.

✓ Almost for important things, not for entertainment.

句子结构不正确，需调整顺序使其通顺。

× And that. I can use Internet too. To to highlight my E fish.

✓ And I can use the Internet to highlight my English skills.

句子不完整且有重复词“to to”，“E fish”应为“English skills”。

× I think I would ask someone for help or. Raced our look or looked up.

✓ I think I would ask someone for help or look up...

句子断裂且“Raced our look”无意义，应改为“look up”。

× The book. The physical book.

✓ a book, a physical book.

此处应使用不定冠词a而非定冠词the。

× Or discuss with others. To get important information or study today.

✓ Or discuss with others to get important information or study today.

句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。