Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习简单句型，确保句子完整且逻辑清楚。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in secondary school because I got my first phone then.

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回答问题，内容重复且表达不流畅。建议直接回答问题并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I go online every day because my phone is very convenient. I can contact my friends and family anytime.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议练习完整句子并直接回答问题。

Ví dụ: I can't remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且语法错误多，未能清楚表达观点。建议练习表达观点的完整句子，并提供理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think many young people, including me, spend too much time online because it is easy to get distracted.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议练习用简单句表达假设情况，并说明理由。

Ví dụ: Without the internet, I would probably spend more time sleeping because it helps me relax.

× In my secondary school. I can I have. Phone. So I I start use the Internet on level.

✓ In my secondary school, I had a phone, so I started using the Internet then.

原句句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。应将分散的短句合并成完整句子，使用正确的时态和词序。建议使用过去时态描述过去的动作。

× So I I start use the Internet on level.

✓ So I started using the Internet then.

动词“start”后应接动名词形式“using”，而不是动词原形“use”。

× And in a day, many people use the phone every day, because the phone is very convenient.

✓ Many people use their phones every day because phones are very convenient.

句首的“and in a day”不合适，且“the phone”应改为复数形式“phones”，以符合泛指。

× You can you can contact, you can count contact with each others every time.

✓ You can contact each other anytime.

“each others”应为“each other”，且句子重复“you can”不必要，应简化表达。

× I don't remember too. Allowed to use the Internet because I don't check this.

✓ I don't remember being not allowed to use the Internet because I didn't pay attention to that.

句子缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整。应使用“being not allowed”表达被禁止的状态，且“check this”不合适，应改为“pay attention to that”。

× I sing. Many young people. This is spend too much time online.

✓ I think many young people spend too much time online.

“sing”应为“think”，且句子结构不完整，应合并为完整句子。

× I can sleeping every day.

✓ I can sleep every day.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形“sleep”，而不是动名词“sleeping”。

× Because I think sleeping is the relaxed me, so when we eat I can.

✓ Because I think sleeping relaxes me, so when we eat, I can rest.

句子结构混乱，“sleeping is the relaxed me”表达不正确，应改为“sleeping relaxes me”。

× I can do my. Like since in my bedroom.

✓ I can do my things, like singing, in my bedroom.

句子不完整且表达不清，应补充完整内容并调整词序。