Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in junior high school. At that time, we used it mainly to find information for our school projects and to stay connected with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中有许多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，明确说明频率，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually go online every couple of hours. If I don't check my phone, I feel out of touch with what's happening around me.

Gợi ý: 表达混乱，语法错误较多，信息不明确。建议用简单句子清楚描述具体时间和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember when I was a child, my parents did not allow me to use the internet because they thought it would distract me from studying.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，词汇使用不当。建议直接表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I enjoy meeting people and relaxing by playing games or watching short videos.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议明确说明没有网络时的具体活动，并用完整句子表达。

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend my time dancing and playing the guitar, especially when I feel tired or lonely.

× connections like a size sorted using the Internet.

✓ connections like a size sorted using the Internet.

该句中“connections like a size sorted”结构不清晰，可能是表达错误，但未涉及单复数错误，故不做修改。

× I am from my junior high school.

✓ I started using it in junior high school.

句中时态不符合上下文，描述过去开始使用网络，应使用过去时。

× At that time we were supposed to. Stay in the love in about our crazy and. Informations in our schools.

✓ At that time, we were supposed to stay in touch about our classes and information in our schools.

句子结构混乱，时态应为过去时，且“informations”应为不可数名词“information”。

× Informations in our schools.

✓ Information in our schools.

information是不可数名词，不能加复数形式“informations”。

× Ash honey I frequently.

✓ Actually, I frequently.

“Ash honey”应为“Actually”，是拼写错误，属于词汇错误，不属于语法问题。

× Go alize is bascially.

✓ Go online basically.

“alize”应为“online”，拼写错误，不属于语法问题。

× Up every couple of hours.

✓ I go online every couple of hours.

句子缺主语和谓语，补充完整。

× If I don't I start feeling net as our hours or pictures.

✓ If I don't, I start feeling restless after a few hours without pictures.

句子结构混乱，表达不清，需调整语序和词汇。

× I guess that's why I'm kind of glued to my phone just to stay in the loop.

✓ I guess that's why I'm kind of glued to my phone just to stay in the loop.

句子语法正确，无需修改。

× Actually, I can record time they are remind childhood when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet.

✓ Actually, I can recall a time in my childhood when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet.

“record time”应为“recall a time”，“they are remind”语法错误，应改为“in my childhood”。

× My parents was Christ Chase always my with about screen and beneath there's XT Internet use could distract me from my studies.

✓ My parents were strict and always warned me that excessive Internet use could distract me from my studies.

“parents”是复数，谓语应为“were”；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Actually, as I think I spend a lot of time online and because in my heart I think great way for meet you and Wiley and recharge by playing the.

✓ Actually, I think I spend a lot of time online because, in my opinion, it's a great way to meet people and relax by playing games.

时态和句子结构不正确，需调整为现在时和完整句子。

× Games and scroll stops go some short videos.

✓ Games and scrolling through some short videos.

“scroll stops go”拼写错误，应为“scrolling through”，动名词形式。

× To be honest, although without the Internet, I have a lot of choice to do, for example an.

✓ To be honest, without the Internet, I would have a lot of choices to do, for example,

表达假设情况，需使用虚拟语气，未来时态“would have”。

× John interested in dancing and playing the guitar when I feel tired and Lonnie.

✓ I am interested in dancing and playing the guitar when I feel tired and lonely.

“John”应为“I”，“Lonnie”应为“lonely”，拼写和代词错误。