Science— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect prepositions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed studying science at secondary school. For example, I was fascinated by astronomy and followed NASA’s Facebook page to learn about star constellations and planet discoveries, which deepened my curiosity about how the universe formed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear, realistic example. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain how science applies to daily life. Avoid inaccurate claims (e.g. driving without magnetic fields) and be specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use basic science every day. For instance, I apply physics when driving—understanding speed and braking—and I use simple chemistry when cooking, such as knowing how heat affects ingredients.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the subject you want to study more, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct grammar to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn more about astrophysics. For example, I want to study magnetic fields and planetary evolution because understanding these topics would explain how planets form and change over time.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (because, so) and correct sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think everyone should study basic science because it helps people understand issues like climate change and public health. This knowledge also enables people to make informed decisions and teach future generations.

Gợi ý: Be direct about your preference and give a specific example of a program or topic you enjoy. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain why you like them.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy watching science programs. For example, I follow NASA’s updates and documentaries about planetary exploration because they explain new discoveries in the solar system and inspire me to learn more.

× Back in my secondary school I enjoyed science subject because I'm interested to the constellation of stars and also I'm following the Facebook page of NASA because I'm very keen on having interest of our how our universe was made as well as discovering new planet is very interesting.

✓ Back in secondary school I enjoyed science subjects because I was interested in constellations of stars, and I followed NASA's Facebook page because I was very keen to learn how our universe was formed; discovering new planets was also very interesting.

Multiple present/past tense inconsistencies and incorrect verb forms: 'Back in my secondary school I enjoyed' sets a past context so subsequent verbs should be past tense (was interested, followed, was keen). Use 'interested in' not 'interested to'. Use plural 'science subjects' or 'science' and plural 'constellations' or 'constellation of stars' corrected to 'constellations of stars'. Use possessive 'NASA's Facebook page'. 'How our universe was made' is better as 'how our universe was formed'. 'Discovering new planet is very interesting' needs past agreement 'was also very interesting' in this past narrative. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (past for past events), use correct prepositions (interested in), use possessive and plural where required.

× In our everyday life, science is always useful, most importantly how we can able to drive a car without the signs of magnetic field, so we use our signs in our daily.

✓ In our everyday life, science is always useful; most importantly, it helps us understand how we can drive a car without relying on signs of a magnetic field, so we use scientific knowledge daily.

Preposition and phrase errors: 'how we can able to' is incorrect — use 'how we can' or 'how we are able to'. 'Without the signs of magnetic field' is unclear; 'relying on signs of a magnetic field' is clearer. 'We use our signs in our daily' is ungrammatical; replace with 'we use scientific knowledge daily'. Suggestions: choose correct verb phrase ('can' or 'are able to'), use 'rely on' for dependence, and use clear nouns ('scientific knowledge') and adverbial phrase 'daily'.

× Way back in my secondary school we had learned some about science and the magnetic fields in of our universe, but for the meantime I had already gained proper knowledge of how the universe works and how our planet evolves in different planets.

✓ Back in secondary school we learned something about science and magnetic fields in the universe, but by now I have already gained proper knowledge of how the universe works and how planets evolve.

Tense inconsistency and wrong word choices: 'Way back' and 'we had learned' suggest past simple 'we learned' is sufficient. 'In of our universe' is erroneous; use 'in the universe'. 'For the meantime' is unnatural — use 'by now' or 'since then'. 'I had already gained' should be present perfect 'I have already gained' to indicate a past action with present relevance. 'How our planet evolves in different planets' is incorrect and redundant; use 'how planets evolve' or 'how our planet evolves'. Suggestions: keep tenses consistent, correct prepositional phrases, and simplify redundant phrasing.

× I think that is the knowledge I I want for them in depth.

✓ I think that is the knowledge I want to learn in depth.

Pronoun and extra word errors: duplicate 'I I' and wrong pronoun/object structure 'want for them' is incorrect. The verb 'want' should take an infinitive object 'to learn' or a noun phrase 'that I want in depth'. Suggestions: remove duplicate words, use correct verb patterns (want to learn), and place modifiers ('in depth') after the verb phrase.

× Yes, it's very crucial to everyone to know science so they have their at least basic knowledge how our planet evolves as well as.

✓ Yes, it's crucial for everyone to know science so they have at least a basic knowledge of how our planet evolves.

Article and preposition errors: 'very crucial to everyone' should be 'crucial for everyone'. 'their at least basic knowledge' ordering and articles wrong — use 'at least a basic knowledge' or better 'at least basic knowledge'. Missing preposition 'of' before 'how our planet evolves'. Also trailing 'as well as' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('for', 'of'), place determiners properly ('a basic'), and avoid sentence fragments.

× It is vital also that you can share it to the future generation how it science works as well.

✓ It is also vital that you can share it with future generations so they understand how science works.

Incorrect prepositions and word order: use 'share with' not 'share to', and plural 'future generations' is natural. 'How it science works' is ungrammatical; correct to 'how science works'. 'As well' is redundant when 'also' is used. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('share with'), correct word order, and avoid redundant adverbs.

× Yes, I am a follower of one of the NASA's Facebook page and I'd like to know about the the futuristic discoveries of the planet, most importantly in our solar system and I would like to understand more about how we able to.

✓ Yes, I follow one of NASA's Facebook pages and I'd like to learn about futuristic discoveries of planets, especially in our solar system, and I would like to understand more about how we are able to do that.

Word choice and adjective/adverb issues: 'a follower of one of the NASA's Facebook page' should be 'I follow one of NASA's Facebook pages' or 'I am a follower of NASA's Facebook page' without 'the'. Duplicate 'the the' typo. 'Futuristic discoveries of the planet' is vague; use 'discoveries of planets' or 'discoveries about planets'. Sentence ends with incomplete clause 'how we able to' — needs auxiliary 'are' and object 'do that'. Suggestions: correct article and possessive use, remove duplicates, use appropriate verbs ('follow', 'learn'), and complete clauses with correct auxiliaries.