Science— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and coherent by using a clear topic sentence and combining short fragments into full sentences. Add one specific reason or example and use linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because it helps me understand how things work. For example, physics lessons taught me how forces affect motion, which satisfied my curiosity about everyday phenomena. Also, science encourages logical thinking, so it’s my favorite subject.

Gợi ý: Be concise but expand slightly to explain the connection (or lack of it) between your job and science. Use linking words to make the statement flow and give a brief example if possible.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t use science knowledge every day because my current job focuses on software development. However, I sometimes apply logical and analytical skills learned from science when debugging code or designing algorithms.

Gợi ý: Make the answer smoother by providing a clearer reason and a brief example of what you want to learn. Use linking words and correct small grammatical issues.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn more about biology because I’m interested in how the human body functions. For instance, learning about cellular processes and anatomy could help me understand medical problems and possible treatments.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Remove vague or grammatically incorrect fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it is important for everyone to study science because it explains how the natural world works. Moreover, scientific education develops critical thinking and problem-solving skills that are useful in many aspects of life.

Gợi ý: Make the tense and grammar consistent and express the idea clearly. Give one specific example of a program or topic and explain why it appealed to you using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked watching science programs on TV when I was younger because they satisfied my curiosity about nature and technology. For example, documentaries about space and animals inspired me to learn more about biology and astronomy.

× Yes, I enjoy studying science at school. It is my favorite subject because I want to explore. The logical world. It makes me.

✓ Yes, I enjoy studying science at school. It is my favorite subject because I want to explore the logical world. It makes sense to me.

Sentences were fragmented and tense/context needed smoothing. 'I want to explore.' and 'The logical world.' are sentence fragments; combine into 'explore the logical world.' Also 'It makes me.' is incomplete; intended meaning is 'It makes sense to me.' Use present simple to match ongoing preference and correct the incomplete clause.

× No, nowadays I only use computer software developer programming skills at work.

✓ No, nowadays I only use computer software development and programming skills at work.

The phrase 'computer software developer programming skills' mixes roles and nouns incorrectly. Use the noun phrase 'software development and programming skills' or 'software developer skills'. Using 'development' is the correct noun following 'software'. This corrects word choice and prepositional/noun usage.

× Yes, I want to learn biology because I want to know how bodies work and it also would help me solve some medicine problems I think.

✓ Yes, I want to learn biology because I want to know how bodies work, and I think it would also help me solve some medical problems.

Reorder clauses for clarity and place 'I think' before 'it would' or attach it to the clause. Use 'medical problems' instead of 'medicine problems' because 'medical' is the correct adjective. Maintain conditional/modal 'would' for potential future benefit.

× Yes, I think science is a very crucial subject in school because it shows how the world works. In the scientist is the most important.

✓ Yes, I think science is a very important subject in school because it shows how the world works. Scientists are the most important.

Original second sentence 'In the scientist is the most important.' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace 'a very crucial' with 'a very important' (stiltable) and correct noun number and order: 'Scientists are the most important' if intended meaning praises scientists. If intended meaning was 'science is most important', use 'Science is the most important subject.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and plural form for 'scientists'.

× Yes, when I was young I like watching science programs on TV. Is satisfied my curiosity at the moment?

✓ Yes, when I was young I liked watching science programs on TV. They satisfied my curiosity at the time.

Mix of past and present: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'liked' (past). 'Is satisfied my curiosity at the moment?' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is past: 'They satisfied my curiosity at the time.' Use past simple consistently and correct pronoun/reference ('they' for programs) and temporal phrase 'at the time'. 'At the moment' refers to present and conflicts with past context.