Movies— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I watch movies every day.”), avoid filler words (uh) and repetitive phrases, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add a brief reason or routine detail to support your answer (use linking words like “because” or “usually”).

Ví dụ: I watch movies every day, usually one or two in the evening because it helps me relax after dinner. Often I stream them at home on my laptop, so watching is part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, structured response: state preferences first, then give specific examples and a short reason. Avoid confusing or contradictory phrases and repetition. Use linking words like “but” and “for example” correctly, and mention a couple of film titles or actors to be specific.

Ví dụ: I watch a wide range of films, but my favorite genres are thrillers and horror because they keep me tense and engaged. For example, I enjoy Hollywood thrillers like Gone Girl and Bollywood suspense films such as Kahaani.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and compare the two options with specific reasons. Use linking words (“however”, “because”, “while”) for coherence and avoid repeating the same idea. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include a brief example of when you go to the cinema.

Ví dụ: I prefer watching movies at home because I'm more comfortable and can pause or choose subtitles, while I still enjoy cinemas for big blockbusters and special releases. For instance, I go to the cinema for action films with spectacular visuals.

Gợi ý: Give a clear reasoned answer and avoid filler words. State the benefit(s) directly, then explain how you use subtitles or other methods to understand them. Use linking words like “because” and “for example” and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, watching films in other languages is useful because it improves vocabulary and cultural understanding. For example, I watch French and Korean films with English subtitles to learn phrases and follow the story more easily.

× I watch movies on daily basis.

✓ I watch movies on a daily basis.

Missing article 'a' before 'daily basis'. Use 'on a daily basis' as the fixed expression meaning 'every day'. Suggestion: add the article 'a' before 'daily basis'.

× One or two movies are the must in my plan.

✓ One or two movies are a must in my plan.

Incorrect use of 'the must' and awkward word order. Use the idiom 'a must' to mean something necessary. Also keep simple subject-verb order. Suggestion: replace 'the must' with 'a must'.

× In the evening after food, uh, I'm really very uh, I watch movie.

✓ In the evening after dinner, I usually watch a movie.

Several issues: 'after food' is unnatural in English (use 'after dinner'), filler words removed, verb tense and article fixed: 'watch movie' needs the indefinite article 'a' for a countable singular noun, and adverb 'usually' fits context better than 'really very'. Suggestion: use 'after dinner' and include 'a' before 'movie'.

× It's compulsory.

✓ It's compulsory.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It can remain as is to emphasize necessity.

× I usually watch all genres movie but my favorite ones are the thriller ones.

✓ I usually watch movies of all genres, but my favorites are thrillers.

Problems: 'all genres movie' is ungrammatical—use 'movies of all genres' or 'movies from all genres'. 'Favorite ones are the thriller ones' is repetitive; use 'my favorites are thrillers' to pluralize and simplify. Suggestion: pluralize and reorder phrases for natural English.

× I think that one that ones are the most the horror ones other than the horror ones and I prefer to watch Hollywood Bollywood movies.

✓ I think thrillers and horror are my favorites, and I prefer to watch Hollywood and Bollywood movies.

Original is confused and repetitive. Clarify by naming the genres and using 'and' between film industries. Use parallel structure 'Hollywood and Bollywood movies'. Suggestion: simplify and clearly list preferences.

× I prefer both but I feel comfortable at home more to watch a movie.

✓ I prefer both, but I feel more comfortable watching a movie at home.

Incorrect word order and use of 'to watch' after 'comfortable'. Use the gerund 'watching' after 'comfortable' and place 'at home' after the verb phrase for natural order. Suggestion: use 'feel more comfortable watching ... at home'.

× I have watched movies many times in cinema also.

✓ I have watched movies in the cinema many times as well.

Word order and article: use 'the cinema' for a general experience of going to the cinema, place adverbs ('many times', 'as well') in natural positions. Suggestion: use present perfect 'have watched' with 'the cinema' and place modifiers properly.

× I love that also but I feel more comfortable at home at my laptop or using Netflix for movies.

✓ I love that too, but I feel more comfortable at home watching on my laptop or using Netflix for movies.

Use 'too' instead of 'also' for short responses. 'At my laptop' is better expressed as 'watching on my laptop'. Use gerund 'watching' after 'comfortable'. Suggestion: restructure to 'comfortable at home watching on my laptop or using Netflix'.

× Yes, it's useful to watch like, uh, movies in other languages, but uh, we have to use the subtitles, uh, so we can understand that, uh, the, uh, the, that we can understand the language and the, the whole movie story.

✓ Yes, it's useful to watch movies in other languages, but we should use subtitles so we can understand the language and the whole story.

Remove fillers. 'Have to use the subtitles' is strong obligation; 'should use subtitles' is a softer, more appropriate suggestion. 'Understand that' and repeated words are redundant; simplify to 'understand the language and the whole story'. Suggestion: use 'should' for recommendation and streamline the sentence for clarity.