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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you interested in news?

Thí sinh

Actually it depends on the news type. Yeah, such as poor such as music news and film news have a very pay attention to it. But if it's about some policy meals, I will don't.

Giám khảo

How do you usually find news?

Thí sinh

Actually I usually find news with my smartphone and television or computer but I use my smartphone often About in Tiktok I will find some updated news.

Giám khảo

Would you like to be a journalist?

Thí sinh

Actually, no, I think I am not suit to be a Gen. generalist because I think I don't like face to the audience.

Giám khảo

Have you read the news this morning?

Thí sinh

Actually no. These days I keep look at the exam and have no time to read the news currently and after this exam I will write the news.

Giám khảo

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often talk with my friends about music news or film news and if we say the news about my except theme film I, we will go to the cinema to watch the movie.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Are you interested in news?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,先给出主句表明你是否对新闻感兴趣,然后用一到两句具体说明哪类新闻吸引你并给出原因。注意语法(例如主谓一致、时态)和词汇选择,避免重复。可以把“such as”正确用于举例,并用简洁连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: I’m interested in some types of news. For example, I follow music and film news closely because I enjoy learning about new releases and artists. However, I’m not very interested in political or economic news as they feel less relevant to my daily life.

How do you usually find news?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要有结构:先说主要渠道,然后补充频率和具体平台。注意词序和冠词(e.g., “on TikTok”),用连接词使句子连贯。尽量用不超过5句且信息具体(比如“apps, websites, social media”)。

Ví dụ: I usually get news through my smartphone, although I sometimes watch TV or use a computer. Mostly I rely on apps and social media; for example, I often see updates on TikTok and news aggregators because they provide quick headlines.

Would you like to be a journalist?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答要简洁明确,先直接回答“Yes/No”,然后简要给出两个具体原因。注意固定搭配(“suitable for”而不是“suit to”),并避免含糊表达。可以用“I don’t enjoy public speaking”代替不自然的短语。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t like to be a journalist. I don’t think I’m suitable for the job because I don’t enjoy public speaking and I prefer working behind the scenes rather than facing large audiences.

Have you read the news this morning?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答,然后说明原因并给出未来打算。注意语法(现在完成时/现在进行时),和短语使用(例如“preparing for exams”而不是“keep look at the exam”)。句子不要过长,信息要具体。

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t read the news this morning. I’m currently preparing for exams so I haven’t had time, but I plan to catch up on the headlines after the exams are over.

Do you often talk with your friends about the news?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要先肯定或否定,再给具体例子和结果。改正表达错误(例如“about my except theme film”不清楚),使用更自然的说法如“if there’s news about a film we’re interested in, we go to the cinema”。保持句子简洁且有逻辑连接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often discuss music and film news with my friends. If there’s news about a film we’re interested in, we usually decide to go to the cinema and watch it together.

Ngữ pháp

26:Sentence structure errors

× Actually it depends on the news type.

Actually, it depends on the type of news.

句子结构更自然:将“news type”改为更常用的“type of news”,并在开头逗号后空格使语流更顺畅。建议多听原文中“type of + 名词”的搭配。

13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yeah, such as poor such as music news and film news have a very pay attention to it.

For example, I pay attention to music and film news.

原句中重复使用“such as”且词序混乱,‘have a very pay attention to it’是错误搭配。用简单句‘I pay attention to music and film news’更自然。建议学习固定搭配:pay attention to + 名词短语。

6:Present tense issue

× But if it's about some policy meals, I will don't.

But if it's about some policies, I won't.

原句时态和否定形式错误:‘I will don't’不合语法,正确为‘I won't’或‘I will not’。另外‘policy meals’词不达意,应为‘policies’(政策)。建议学习将来时的否定形式:will not / won't。

26:Sentence structure errors

× Actually I usually find news with my smartphone and television or computer but I use my smartphone often About in Tiktok I will find some updated news.

Actually, I usually get news on my smartphone, television, or computer, but I often use my smartphone. On TikTok I find some updated news.

原句冗长且语序混乱,‘find news with’用法不自然,改为‘get news on’或‘find news on’更合适。将句子拆成两句并调整词序,去掉多余介词,提升可理解性。建议使用短句并掌握常见搭配:get/find news on + 平台。

26:Sentence structure errors

× Actually, no. These days I keep look at the exam and have no time to read the news currently and after this exam I will write the news.

Actually, no. These days I am focusing on the exam and have no time to read the news. After the exam I will read the news.

原句中‘keep look at the exam’和‘write the news’不合适;‘keep look’应为进行时‘am focusing on’或‘am studying for’,并且‘write the news’应为‘read the news’(若想表达看新闻)。将‘currently’与‘these days’重复,删除冗余并调整时态。建议学习动词固定搭配:focus on/study for an exam;read the news。

12:Incorrect use of pronouns

× Actually, no, I think I am not suit to be a Gen. generalist because I think I don't like face to the audience.

Actually, no. I think I am not suited to be a generalist because I don't like facing an audience.

原句中‘not suit to’错误,应为‘not suited to’或‘I am not suitable to/for’;缩写和重复(Gen. generalist)不当;‘don't like face to the audience’需改为动名词结构‘don't like facing an audience’或‘don't like to face an audience’。建议学习形容词‘suited/suitable to/for’和动词后接-ing形式用法。

5:Past tense issue

× Student: Actually no. These days I keep look at the exam and have no time to read the news currently and after this exam I will write the news.

Actually, no. These days I am preparing for the exam and have no time to read the news; after the exam I will read the news.

与之前重复句类似,强调进行时‘am preparing’更合适,‘will read’表示将来。避免使用‘keep look at’和‘write the news’这类错误词组。建议掌握现在进行时表达正在做的事情。

26:Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I often talk with my friends about music news or film news and if we say the news about my except theme film I, we will go to the cinema to watch the movie.

Yes, I often talk with my friends about music or film news, and if we agree on a film we like, we will go to the cinema to watch it.

原句语序混乱及词语错误:‘if we say the news about my except theme film I’没有意义。应改为‘if we agree on a film we like’或‘if we decide on a film’。同时重复‘music news or film news’可简化为‘music or film news’。建议练习用简单明确的条件句表达决定或计划。

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