Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Thí sinh
It depends. I can remember short numbers like my phone number or pin, but I struggle with long number. I use different strategies depending on how important the number is.
Giám khảo
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Thí sinh
It depends on the specific project or task at hand. Some aspects of my job requires numbers while others do not. Additionally, future career changes may influence how much I use number.
Giám khảo
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really enjoy studying maths as a child. I love solving problems or puzzles. My maths teacher are excellent at making subjects engaging and I even participated in competitions which I found challenging and enjoy.
Giám khảo
Which numbers are important to you?
Thí sinh
Lucky number is important to me. I consider 7 to be my lucky number. In my culture, the number 8 is also considered very lucky. I avoid the number 4 because it seems unlucky in some cultures.
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答整体合理但存在语法和表达不够准确的问题。注意单复数(例如“long number”应为“long numbers”)和冠词用法;可以用一到两句补充具体策略(例如分组或联想法)来丰富内容,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。控制在最多五句内,避免重复“depends”。
Ví dụ: It depends. I can remember short numbers like my phone number or PIN, but I struggle with long numbers. When a number is important, I usually break it into smaller chunks or create a memorable pattern, which helps me recall it later.
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰但有语法错误和重复词汇(例如“requires”主语不一致,且“number”应为“numbers”)。建议直接给出肯定或否定的主题句,然后用1-2句具体说明哪些工作场景会用到数字,使用连接词如“for example”或“however”。
Ví dụ: It depends on the role, but I expect to use numbers in many tasks. For example, I often handle budgets and reports that require numerical analysis, while creative projects may need fewer calculations.
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 内容积极但时态和主谓一致错误明显(应使用过去时,如“enjoyed”,“was”而非“are”)。避免同时使用重复的表达(如“enjoy”多次)。建议先用一句主题句说明喜好,再用1-2句说明具体原因或例子,注意动词时态一致并用连接词如“because”或“which”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I liked solving puzzles and challenges. My math teacher made lessons fun and I even took part in competitions, which helped me improve my problem-solving skills.
Which numbers are important to you?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰且具体,但第一句语法不完整(应为“Lucky numbers are important to me”)。可以通过连接词提高连贯性,例如先总体说明,再分别说明例子和原因,避免笼统表述“seems unlucky”,可以给出简短原因。
Ví dụ: Lucky numbers are important to me. For instance, I consider 7 to be my personal lucky number, while 8 is widely seen as lucky in my culture because it sounds like the word for prosperity. I tend to avoid 4 because it is associated with bad luck in some traditions.
× I can remember short numbers like my phone number or pin, but I struggle with long number.
✓ I can remember short numbers like my phone number or PIN, but I struggle with long numbers.
原句中“long number”应为复数“long numbers”,因为前面提到的是“一类事物”(长的数字),且与句中“short numbers”保持形式一致。建议:当谈论某一类可数名词时使用复数形式。
× Some aspects of my job requires numbers while others do not.
✓ Some aspects of my job require numbers while others do not.
主语是复数短语“Some aspects”,谓语动词应与之保持一致,使用复数动词“require”。建议:确定主语是单数还是复数并相应调整动词。
× Additionally, future career changes may influence how much I use number.
✓ Additionally, future career changes may influence how much I use numbers.
“number”在此表示一般性的“数字”应使用复数“numbers”。当表示不可数概念时也可用“numbers”来指各种具体数字。建议:此类通用指称用复数。
× Yes, I really enjoy studying maths as a child.
✓ Yes, I really enjoyed studying math as a child.
问句询问过去的经历(Did you enjoy...?),回答应使用过去时,故“enjoy”改为过去式“enjoyed”。另外,英式英语用“maths”,美式用“math”;根据一般用法统一为“math”。建议:回答与提问时态保持一致。
× My maths teacher are excellent at making subjects engaging and I even participated in competitions which I found challenging and enjoy.
✓ My math teacher was excellent at making the subject engaging, and I even participated in competitions which I found challenging and enjoyable.
句中存在多处问题: 1) 主语“My math teacher”是单数,应使用单数谓语“was/ is”,且因为在讲过去经历用过去时“was”。 2) “subjects”指代不明确,改为单数“the subject”更合适或可直接说“math”。 3) 原句末尾“and enjoy”时态不一致且结构不完整,改为过去分词形容词“enjoyable”或使用过去时短语“and I enjoyed them”。建议:确保主谓一致,时态统一,修饰词使用恰当。
× Lucky number is important to me.
✓ Lucky numbers are important to me.
原句使用单数“Lucky number”不自然,若指一般概念“幸运数字”应使用复数“Lucky numbers”或在前面加定冠词“My lucky number is important to me.”根据上下文应为复数。建议:确定是说一般概念(复数)还是特指某个数字(使用‘my’ + 单数)。
× I consider 7 to be my lucky number.
✓ I consider 7 to be my lucky number.
该句语法正确,无需修改。但根据其他句子,若前文改为“Lucky numbers are important to me.”保持此句不变以说明特指的幸运数字。建议:无。
× In my culture, the number 8 is also considered very lucky.
✓ In my culture, the number 8 is also considered very lucky.
该句语法正确,无需修改。说明:数词前加定冠词“the number 8”用法恰当。
× I avoid the number 4 because it seems unlucky in some cultures.
✓ I avoid the number 4 because it seems unlucky in some cultures.
该句语法正确,无需修改。'the number 4' 表示特指数字,使用正确。建议:无。