Number— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (“Yes, I am good at remembering numbers.”), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “for example,” “because”). Avoid filler words and repetition. Work on grammatical accuracy (verb forms, articles) and natural phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers. For example, I follow sports matches closely, so I often remember scores and player statistics, and when I solve math problems I usually recall the correct answers quickly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, then support with a concise reason and an example. Use correct tense and avoid repeating the same idea. Replace vague phrases with concrete statements and link ideas (e.g., “However,” “For example”).

Ví dụ: I don't expect to use numbers much in my future work because my planned job is in a creative field. However, I will still need them occasionally for practical things, such as phone numbers or scheduling appointments.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear yes/no or short topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “for example.” Correct word order and collocations (e.g., “My favorite subject was maths as a child” and “it was very interesting”). Limit to two or three sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved studying maths as a child because it was interesting and logical. For example, solving problems helped me concentrate and I enjoyed proving answers step by step.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with a clear reason and an example. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases (“unlocking number”, “mind locking number”); use natural expressions like “lucky number.” Keep to two sentences and fix grammar and word choice.

Ví dụ: The number seven is important to me because I consider it my lucky number. For example, when I choose a number for competitions or auditions I usually pick seven because it makes me feel more confident.

× I guess yes, because I love the matches very much and also it contains the number.

✓ I guess so, because I love matches very much and they also contain numbers.

Use 'so' after 'I guess' for natural response; 'matches' as a plural noun should not take 'the' unless specific; 'it contains the number' misuses singular pronoun and singular 'number' — use plural 'they contain numbers' to agree with plural 'matches'.

× Umm, also while I'm doing, while I'm solving the problems, I remember the answer mostly.

✓ Also, while I'm solving problems, I mostly remember the answers.

Avoid repeating 'while I'm doing' and use concise present continuous 'while I'm solving problems'. 'I remember the answer mostly' has incorrect word order; place 'mostly' before the verb or before the object and make 'answer' plural to match 'problems'.

× I don't think I used the numbers in my future works because it don't seems anything related except the phone numbers.

✓ I don't think I will use numbers in my future work because they don't seem related, except for phone numbers.

Tense: use future 'will' for future actions. 'Used' is past form — incorrect. 'Works' should be 'work' (uncountable) and 'it don't seems' has subject-verb and pronoun errors: use 'they don't seem' to agree with 'numbers' and 'seem' without 's' after 'don't'.

× Yeah, in phone numbers more people use the numbers for work.

✓ Yes, many people use phone numbers for work.

Word order and preposition: 'in phone numbers' is wrong; say 'use phone numbers for work'. 'More people' is vague here; 'many people' is clearer. Remove redundant 'the numbers'.

× Despite that, I don't think I used the numbers in future.

✓ Despite that, I don't think I will use numbers in the future.

Again use future 'will' for future actions. Add article 'the' before 'future' in this idiomatic expression and remove 'the' before 'numbers'.

× I loved it.

✓ No change: I loved it.

This sentence correctly uses past tense to answer a question about childhood, so no correction is necessary.

× I firstly my favorite subject was math during a child because it makes very much interesting.

✓ First, my favorite subject during childhood was math because I found it very interesting.

Word order and idiom: 'I firstly my favorite subject was' is ungrammatical; use 'First' or 'Firstly' at the sentence start. 'During a child' is incorrect; use 'during childhood' or 'as a child'. 'It makes very much interesting' is wrong—use 'I found it very interesting'.

× It helps to focus while calculating and also uh for proving that the things.

✓ It helps me focus when calculating and also when proving things.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' when followed by verb without 'to' in this structure: 'helps me focus'. Use 'when' rather than 'while' for these activities. 'Proving that the things' is awkward—use 'proving things' or 'proving statements'.

× Maybe #7 because it is, it's my unlocking number and whenever I use that number I will be lucky.

✓ Maybe number 7, because it's my unlocking number and whenever I use it I feel lucky.

Redundant 'it is, it's' simplified to 'it's'. 'Whenever I use that number I will be lucky' is grammatically possible but 'feel lucky' is more natural than 'be lucky' for habitual events; use 'use it' to avoid repetition.

× For example, why picking a numbers uh, for the audition or anything?

✓ For example, when choosing a number for an audition or something,

The original is a fragment and ungrammatical: 'why picking a numbers' mixes 'why' with '-ing' form and incorrect article/number agreement. Use 'when choosing a number' and 'an audition or something' for clarity and correct article usage.

× I will rather choose uh seven then other number because it's mind locking number.

✓ I would rather choose seven than another number because it's my lucky number.

Use conditional 'would rather' for preference. 'Then' should be 'than' in comparisons. 'Other number' needs an article 'another number'. 'Mind locking number' is incorrect phrase — likely meant 'lucky number' and add possessive 'my'.