Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a bike but my brother used to have a bike so I always used his bike to go to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not really because everyone is riding motorcycle. Barely see bicycle on the road. And mainly is because we don't have a bicycle road.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答需要注意时态和表达自然性。第一句应使用过去时(I didn't have a bike)。然后给出一到两句具体细节,例如什么时候、多久或去学校的距离,并使用连词使衔接更顺畅。避免冗长重复,保持最多五句。
Ví dụ: I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My brother had one, so I often borrowed it to ride to school, which was about a ten-minute trip. Because I shared his bike, I usually rode it only on weekdays and walked on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 需更自然完整地表达观点并用连接词衔接句子,同时用更准确的词汇(e.g., motorcycles, rarely)。可以补充具体原因和比较,比如城市与乡村差异,或给出一个短预测。保持逻辑性并控制句数在三到五句。
Ví dụ: Not really — motorcycles are much more common than bicycles in my country. You rarely see people riding bikes in the city because there are few dedicated bike lanes and traffic can be dangerous. In rural areas bikes are a bit more common, but overall I think motorcycle use will stay higher unless infrastructure improves.
× No, I don't have a bike but my brother used to have a bike so I always used his bike to go to school.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but my brother used to have one, so I always used his bike to go to school.
错误类型:现在时使用不当(应与过去时间状语一致)。原句中提问是过去时("Did you have... when you were a child?"),回答却使用了现在时"don't have",而后半句又用过去时"used to",时态不一致。建议:把与过去相关的动词都改为过去式或过去习惯"used to",并用代词one避免重复。可将"don't have"改为过去式"didn't have",保持时态一致。
× Not really because everyone is riding motorcycle. Barely see bicycle on the road. And mainly is because we don't have a bicycle road.
✓ Not really, because most people ride motorcycles. I rarely see bicycles on the road, and mainly it's because we don't have bicycle lanes.
错误类型:动词形式和句子结构错误、名词复数与冠词使用问题。原句"everyone is riding motorcycle"使用现在进行且名词单复数不当,常态事实应使用一般现在时("ride"),并且"motorcycle"应为复数或加不定冠词。第二句缺主语且时态用法不自然("Barely see bicycle"),应加主语并使用一般现在时且把"bicycle"改为复数。第三句语序和词汇("bicycle road"不自然)也需调整,通常说"bicycle lane(s)"或"cycle paths",并在主句中加上形式主语"it's"或重写为从句。建议:使用一般现在时描述普遍事实,确保主语与动词一致,使用正确的名词单复数形式,并使用常见搭配如"bicycle lanes"或"cycle paths"。