Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did have it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Now more people like to try dry dry, dry carb, dry car.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺少细节和连接词。建议在开头用主题句直接回答,然后添加1–2个具体细节(例如什么时候得到的、骑车的频率或和谁一起骑),并使用连接词使句子更自然。例如可用 because, when, so, and 等。注意语法:通常说 “Yes, I did” 或 “Yes, I had a bike” 更自然,不要同时用 did 和 have。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it to visit my friend after school because it was faster than walking.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语音或用词错误,未直接回应问题。建议先给出明确观点(Yes/No/Somewhat),然后用1–2个具体理由或例子支持,比如交通拥堵、环保或健身等,并用连接词(for example, because, so)保证逻辑清晰。避免不清晰的词汇,应使用准确表达(e.g. "electric cars", "ride-sharing", "cycling").
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular because many people prefer cycling for exercise and to avoid traffic; for example, cities have built more bike lanes in the past five years, which encourages commuting by bike.
× Yes, I did have it.
✓ Yes, I did.
句子中使用了助动词 did(用于过去时的强调或构成否定/疑问),后面不应再跟动词的过去式或原形以外的形式。原句 “Yes, I did have it.” 虽然语法上并非完全错误,但在回答问题 “Did you have a bike when you were a child?” 时更自然、简洁的回答是简短肯定句 “Yes, I did.” 或 “Yes, I had one.” 如果使用 “did” 作助动词强调,后面应使用动词原形(例如:I did have one.)但更常用的是省略重复信息。建议:用 “Yes, I did.” 或 “Yes, I had one.” 来更清楚、地道地回答。
× Now more people like to try dry dry, dry carb, dry car.
✓ Nowadays more people like to try driving cars.
原句存在多处问题:1) 词序和搭配错误 — 正确表达“现在”应使用 nowadays 或 now 置于句首;2) “try dry dry, dry carb, dry car” 是重复且拼写错误,推测意图为“try driving cars”(尝试开车);3) 动词形式错误 — 在表示尝试某行为时应使用 try + -ing 形式(try driving);4) 名词复数形式 — cars 用复数更符合“一般更多人”的意思。综合修改为 “Nowadays more people like to try driving cars.” 建议:使用 try + 动名词,注意拼写,使用 nowadays 表示现在的趋势,并把名词复数化以匹配主语。