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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did. I had a bike in my childhood. My dad bought it for me. I loved riding my bike because I can breathe the fresh air and feel very relaxed.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think they are popular in my country because I can almost see a lot back in the streets and in recent years there are more and more people buy cars and.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁自然,并注意时态一致与句子衔接。第一句可以直接回答并给出简短原因,后面用一到两句具体细节丰富内容。注意将现在时改为过去时(can → could),避免重复信息(“had a bike”与“I had a bike in my childhood”重复)。可以用连接词(for example, because, which)使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bicycle when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Riding made me feel relaxed because I could enjoy the fresh air and watch the scenery, which was a great break from studying.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰、有逻辑并且语法正确。避免模糊表达(例如“can almost see a lot”不自然)。注意句子完整,时态和主谓一致(people buy → people have been buying 或 people buy)。提供具体观察或趋势作为支持,并使用连接词(for example, however, although)来表达对比或理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular, especially in cities. For example, I often see cyclists commuting to work and students riding to school. However, in recent years more people have been buying cars, so bike usage has declined somewhat in suburbs.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I loved riding my bike because I can breathe the fresh air and feel very relaxed.

I loved riding my bike because I could breathe the fresh air and feel very relaxed.

这里时态不一致。句子开头用的是过去时“I loved”,描述过去习惯或状态时,后面描述同时发生的动作或感受也应使用过去时,因此将“can”改为过去式“could”。建议:在描述过去发生的事情时,全文保持过去时一致。

Present tense issue

× I think they are popular in my country because I can almost see a lot back in the streets and in recent years there are more and more people buy cars and.

I think they are popular in my country because I can almost see a lot on the streets, and in recent years there have been more and more people buying cars.

该句包含多处时态和结构问题:1) “see a lot back in the streets”结构不自然,应为“see a lot on the streets”;2) 在并列部分“in recent years there are more and more people buy cars”时态和语法错误。因为强调“近几年”这一持续变化,应使用现在完成时表达变化过程,且后半句中动词应用-ing形式表示正在发生或趋势(people buying cars)。因此改为“there have been more and more people buying cars”。建议:注意介词搭配(on the streets),并在表达从过去到现在的变化时使用现在完成时,表示趋势时用动名词短语。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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