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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't because the first time I rode a bike I fell down, so I'm afraid of riding a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it seemed to be very popular in my country, especially my city, because in the streets you can see most of people riding a bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且简短,但可以更自然、更连贯并提供少量细节以显得更完整。注意用连接词使句子流畅,避免重复“bike/biking”。可补充时间或后续影响(例如是否仍怕或尝试克服)。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. The first time I tried cycling I fell off and hurt myself, so I’ve always felt a bit nervous about riding since then. However, I sometimes consider taking a few lessons to get more confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关且有理由,但语法和用词需改进,使表达更自然准确。避免时态和数量错误(例如 use 'seem'或'are',写成 'many people' 而非 'most of people')。可以加入具体例子或比较来增强回答。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular, especially in my city. You can see many people cycling to work or school, and there are dedicated bike lanes that make riding convenient and safe.

Ngữ pháp

× No, I didn't because the first time I rode a bike I fell down, so I'm afraid of riding a bike.

No, I didn't, because the first time I rode a bike I fell off, so I'm afraid of riding a bike.

问题类型:11(介词或短语使用不当)。说明:原句中用 “fell down” 在骑自行车时通常更常用的短语是 “fell off” 表示从自行车上摔下来。建议:将 “fell down” 改为 “fell off”;并在连接词 "because" 前加逗号以改善句子节奏。

1 | 6 | 11 | 27

× Yes, it seemed to be very popular in my country, especially my city, because in the streets you can see most of people riding a bike.

Yes, they seem to be very popular in my country, especially in my city, because in the streets you can see most people riding bikes.

说明(简体中文): 1) 问题类型:6(现在时问题)和27(主谓一致)。原句用过去时 “seemed to be” 与后文现在时描述不一致;应使用一般现在时“seem to be”或直接“are”。此外,主语“bikes”是复数,谓语应与之一致,使用“they seem/are”。 2) 问题类型:11(介词使用)。“especially my city” 应改为 “especially in my city” 来表示“特别是在我所在的城市”。 3) 问题类型:1(单复数问题)和13(形容词/副词使用相关)。“most of people” 不自然,应为 “most people”;“riding a bike” 更自然的复数说法为 “riding bikes” 或保留单数但与句意匹配。 建议:把时态改为现在时(they seem / are),在 “especially” 前加介词 “in”,把 “most of people” 改为 “most people”,并把 “riding a bike” 改为 “riding bikes”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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