Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I see many people ride a bike, go across the road every day.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答简短直接,但过于简略,未展示语言能力或提供细节。建议在主题句后补充1-2个支持细节(例如什么时候得到、骑车的频率或与谁一起骑),并使用连接词使回答更连贯。例如加入时间状语和原因或感受。注意控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight, and I often rode it to school with my friends. Riding made me feel independent and allowed me to explore the neighborhood more.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案表达了肯定,但语言不够自然,有语法和逻辑问题(例如“go across the road”用法不当)。建议用一到两句具体说明为什么喜欢(如通勤、环保或锻炼),并用连接词(例如“because”或“for example”)增强逻辑。改进时注意动词搭配和句子流畅度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and to save money. For example, in the mornings you can see commuters cycling to work and students riding to school.
× Yes, of course, I see many people ride a bike, go across the road every day.
✓ Yes, of course. I see many people riding bikes and crossing the road every day.
错误类型:量词/可数名词使用与动词形式不当。解析:原句中“many people ride a bike”在数量与名词单复数搭配不当,通常应使用复数名词“bikes”或用不定式结构并保持动词形式一致;另外,两个并列动作应使用相同的动词形式,且更自然的表达是使用动名词(riding, crossing)来表示正在进行或经常发生的动作。建议:1) 将“ride a bike”改为“riding bikes”或“ride bikes”;2) 并列动作用相同结构(如“riding bikes and crossing the road”);3) 将句子拆为更清晰的句子或用连词连接,并注意标点。例如:"Yes, of course. I see many people riding bikes and crossing the road every day."