Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting details. Avoid fillers and repetition. Mention a specific memory or detail to make the answer more vivid. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and use linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I had a small red bike that my father gave me for my seventh birthday. I remember learning to ride it in the park near our house, and I felt proud and independent once I could cycle without help.

Gợi ý: Make your opinion direct and support it with specific reasons and clear linking words. Correct grammar and collocations (e.g., “keep fit” not “keep health alive”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Give one or two concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, especially among students and commuters who cycle to save money and keep fit. However, many families prefer cars because they are more convenient for long trips and carrying children or shopping.

× So actually when I was child, I has, I had a small bike which my father gave me on my birthday.

✓ So actually when I was a child, I had a small bike which my father gave me on my birthday.

The error is missing the article 'a' before 'child' and misuse of present tense verb 'has' where past tense 'had' is required. According to the context ('when I was a child') the past tense should be used. Insert the indefinite article before singular noun 'child' and use the past tense 'had' (not 'has'). Suggestion: Always include articles with singular countable nouns ('a child') and match verb tense to time expressions (use past tense after 'when I was...').

× It was a present for me because, you know, I felt very great when I had such a print, such a gift.

✓ It was a present for me because, you know, I felt very happy when I received such a gift.

The phrase 'felt very great' is unnatural and 'had such a print' is incorrect word choice. 'Felt very happy' or 'felt great' are correct adjective choices; 'received' is the appropriate verb for getting a gift in the past. Also 'print' is the wrong noun here. Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('felt very happy', 'received a gift') and keep verbs in the past to match the time frame.

× Yes I do but I think it depends because some people have a have a bike because the training they have keep health alive.

✓ Yes, I do, but I think it depends, because some people have a bike for the exercise they get to stay healthy.

Errors include repetition 'have a have a', incorrect phrase 'the training they have keep health alive', and tense/structure problems. Replace redundant words, use 'for the exercise they get' or 'to keep fit' and 'stay healthy' to express purpose. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'exercise... helps them stay healthy' or 'they get to stay healthy'. Suggestion: Remove repetitions, use clearer purpose structures (for + noun or to + verb) and maintain correct verb forms.

× But I think for most of people it's more convenient to have a car because you can travel a lot with travel more.

✓ But I think for most people it's more convenient to have a car because you can travel more.

'Most of people' is incorrect; use 'most people'. The phrase 'travel a lot with travel more' is repetitive and ungrammatical—use 'travel more' or 'travel a lot'. Suggestion: Use 'most people' for general statements and avoid redundant phrases; choose one clear expression ('travel more' or 'travel a lot').