Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Shorten and clarify your response, use a clear topic sentence, fix minor grammar errors, and add one or two specific details. Aim for 2–4 sentences and include a linking word when adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. At first I wasn’t very good, but after my dad spent a few days teaching me riding techniques, I became more confident. As a result, cycling almost became one of my main hobbies.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, use linking words for contrast, avoid informal phrases like 'you'd' repeatedly, and provide one specific example or reason. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Not really — bikes are not very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars, buses or motorcycles, so bicycles are mostly seen only in small towns or recreational areas rather than on main roads.

× 'Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't a very skilled bike rider it so it wasn't my main hobby until my dad spent a few days teaching me how to ride a bike and teaching me different techniques.'

✓ 'Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, but I wasn't a very skilled bike rider, so it wasn't my main hobby until my dad spent a few days teaching me how to ride and showing me different techniques.'

'Subject-verb agreement' is not the primary issue here; the sentence contains a misplaced pronoun and awkward coordination. The phrase "rider it" is incorrect because "it" is unnecessary and creates a sentence fragment. Also, repeating "teaching me how to ride a bike and teaching me different techniques" is redundant. Suggestion: remove the extra pronoun, use a comma before the coordinating conjunction "so," and simplify the second clause to avoid repetition. Use parallel structure: "teaching me how to ride and showing me different techniques.'

× 'So it then almost became one of my hobbies because I really wanted to bike more.'

✓ 'So it almost became one of my hobbies because I really wanted to ride my bike more.'

'Sentence structure errors' include incorrect word choice and awkward phrasing. "Wanted to bike more" is informal and slightly awkward; use the verb phrase "ride my bike" for clarity. Also, the adverb "then" is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother flow. Maintain logical word order: subject + verb + object.'

× 'I don't really think so since I live in a very small country.'

✓ 'I don't really think so, since I live in a very small country.'

'Sentence structure errors' here involve punctuation affecting clause clarity. A comma should separate the main clause and the adverbial clause "since I live in a very small country." Adding the comma improves readability and correctly links the reason to the main clause.'

× 'You'd honestly see more of big and new developed vehicles.'

✓ 'You'd honestly see more big, newly developed vehicles.'

'Subject-verb agreement' label is not exact; the main issues are adjective order and word form. "Big and new developed vehicles" is ungrammatical: use adjective order "big, newly developed" and the adverbial form "newly" to modify "developed." Also remove unnecessary preposition "of." Suggestion: use "more" directly before the noun phrase.'

× 'Like you see cars, trucks, buses and even motorcycles.'

✓ 'For example, you see cars, trucks, buses, and even motorcycles.'

'Incorrect use of prepositions' broadly covers the informal opener "Like" used to introduce examples. Use "For example" or "You see" without "Like" to formally introduce examples. Also add a comma before the final item in the list (Oxford comma) for clarity.'

× 'But you wouldn't really see bikes.'

✓ 'But you don't really see many bicycles.'

'Sentence structure errors' include register and specificity. "You wouldn't really see bikes" mixes conditional/modal tone with present general statement. The question asks about general popularity, so use the simple present "don't" and "many bicycles" for natural phrasing. Also "bicycles" is slightly more formal than "bikes.'

× 'You'd see them in small areas and towns but not in normal roads.'

✓ 'You'd see them in small towns and rural areas, but not on main roads.'

'Incorrect use of prepositions' is present: "in small areas and towns" is awkward and "not in normal roads" uses the wrong preposition and adjective. Use "in small towns and rural areas" for clarity and "on main roads" to indicate location on roads. Also add a comma before "but" to separate clauses.'