Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a brief result or feeling. Avoid filler words and repetition (e.g., "like"). Use linking words (e.g., "but", "however", "because").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child and I enjoyed riding it. However, I wasn't very skilled at first, so it wasn't my main hobby. Later, my dad taught me proper riding techniques, and after that I became much more confident and rode more often.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then support it with one or two specific reasons and an example. Reduce repetition and filler words, and use linking words for coherence (e.g., "because", "for example").

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because it is small and people prefer motor vehicles. For example, in cities you mostly see cars and trucks, while bicycles are mainly used in smaller towns for short trips.

× Yes, I actually did have a bike when I was a child and I used to love biking so much, but I wasn't really good at biking so it wasn't like one of my top interests.

✓ Yes, I actually had a bike when I was a child and I used to love biking so much, but I wasn't really good at it so it wasn't one of my top interests.

Redundant use of 'did have' is unnecessary in a simple past declarative sentence; use simple past 'had'. Also, repeating 'biking' is wordy; replace second instance with pronoun 'it' for clarity and concision. Suggestion: use simple past for past facts and avoid unnecessary auxiliaries.

× I didn't really get into loving bikes until my dad taught me how to like be a good bike rider.

✓ I didn't really get into loving bikes until my dad taught me how to be a good bike rider.

Incorrect insertion of 'like' before the infinitive and awkward 'how to like be' construction. The correct structure is 'taught me how to be' + noun phrase. Remove 'like' and use infinitive 'to be'. Suggestion: after 'taught me how to' use base verb without extra fillers.

× I don't really think so since my country is a very small country.

✓ I don't really think so because my country is very small.

Use 'because' rather than 'since' to express reason in spoken response for clarity; also avoid repeating 'country' (wordiness). 'Is a very small country' is grammatical but repetitive; 'is very small' is concise. Suggestion: prefer concise phrasing and appropriate causal conjunctions.

× We see bikes but not very often.

✓ We do see bikes, but not very often.

Simple sentence is acceptable, but adding auxiliary 'do' before 'see' helps emphasize contrast with 'but not very often' in spoken English. Suggestion: use 'do' for emphasis when contradicting expectation.

× Like they're mostly in small towns like my town.

✓ They are mostly in small towns like mine.

Avoid starting sentences with filler 'Like' in formal responses; use 'They are' or 'They're'. Use possessive pronoun 'mine' instead of repeating 'my town'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use correct possessive pronoun.

× But if you go outside or like in public roads and all these, you won't really see them.

✓ But if you go outside or onto public roads, you won't really see them.

Awkward phrasing 'or like in public roads and all these' with filler 'like' and incorrect preposition 'in' for 'roads'. Use 'onto public roads' or 'on public roads' and remove filler. Suggestion: avoid fillers and choose correct prepositions for locations.

× You'd mostly find cars, trucks and like big vehicles.

✓ You mostly find cars, trucks, and large vehicles.

Use 'mostly find' rather than conditional 'You'd' if stating a general observation; 'like' is filler and should be removed. 'Big vehicles' is less natural than 'large vehicles'. Suggestion: for general truths use present simple and avoid filler words.