Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid awkward phrases like “paddling my cycle” and repetition. Use linking words (for example, “and” or “so”) to connect ideas and keep sentences simple (max 4–5 sentences). Also correct collocations (say “pedal bike” or “bicycle” rather than “pedal cycle” if you prefer).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a proper bicycle, but I had a simple pedal bike as a child. I learned to ride it in the park near my house, and I used to cycle there every afternoon with my friends.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more coherent: give a direct statement, then one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” or “so”). Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases (e.g., “used to have a cycle all” and “convenient to be”). Use specific examples or trends (commuting, exercise, bike lanes). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are more popular now than before because many people use them for exercise and to avoid traffic. For example, there are more bike lanes in cities and many commuters choose cycling for short journeys.

× I learned to ride it in the park near my house and used to cycle there every afternoon with my friends and enjoy spending time by paddling my cycle.

✓ I learned to ride it in the park near my house and used to cycle there every afternoon with my friends and enjoyed spending time riding my bike.

Mixed past-tense sequence: 'used to cycle' is past habitual but 'enjoy' is present form; it should be past 'enjoyed' to match. 'Paddling my cycle' is incorrect collocation; 'ride' or 'riding my bike' is correct. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past tense and use natural collocations ('ride a bike').

× Yes, bikes are more popular now than before.

✓ Yes, bicycles are more popular now than before.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'bikes' is informal; 'bicycles' is a clearer noun in a formal test response. No tense change needed. Suggestion: prefer 'bicycles' for clarity.

× When I was a child there was a cycle race in my neighborhood park.

✓ When I was a child, there used to be a cycle race in my neighborhood park.

The original 'there was a cycle race' is grammatical but slightly awkward for recurring events; 'used to be' indicates a past habitual event that no longer happens. Also missing comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habitual situations and include comma after the time clause.

× But nowadays many more people cycle for exercise and to avoid traffic and some used to have a cycle all, although also they have a convenient to be.

✓ But nowadays many more people cycle for exercise and to avoid traffic, and many people own bicycles because they are convenient.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains several problems: 'some used to have a cycle all' is unclear and mixes past habitual 'used to' with present context; 'although also they have a convenient to be' is meaningless. I corrected to a clear present-tense statement matching 'nowadays'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present for current trends), use clear subjects ('many people'), and use correct word order and collocations ('own bicycles', 'because they are convenient').