Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant words (e.g., "bike cycle", "which is my favorite colour though") and use one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words for flow. Also correct minor grammar (say "its color was black" or "a black bike").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather gave me a black bike for my birthday, and I loved it because black was my favorite colour and it felt sturdy for riding around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "more favorable as well" and correct grammar ("convenient method" → "a convenient option"). Mention concrete examples or numbers if possible.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in India. Mainly, they are a convenient option in cities because they can weave through heavy traffic, and they are cheaper to buy and run than cars, so many people — especially students and small business owners — prefer them.

× Yes, I had a bike cycle when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a kid.

The word 'bike cycle' is redundant and incorrect; the correct single noun is 'bicycle' or 'bike'. Use one word. This is an issue with word choice rather than a verb form; use 'bicycle' for clarity.

× It was given by my grandfather on my birthday.

✓ It was given to me by my grandfather on my birthday.

The original sentence omits the indirect object 'me' after 'given'. In English, 'give' requires a recipient: 'give something to someone' or 'give someone something'. Adding 'to me' clarifies who received the bicycle.

× Moreover, the bike was in black colour which is my favorite colour though.

✓ Moreover, the bike was black, which is my favorite colour.

Use 'black' as an adjective directly with the noun: 'the bike was black'. The phrase 'in black colour' is unidiomatic. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is my favorite colour'. Remove the final 'though' which is unnecessary here.

× Absolutely, in India, bikes are very popular among the population because it is very convenient method due to the traffic jams.

✓ Absolutely. In India, bikes are very popular among the population because they are a very convenient mode of transport given the traffic jams.

'Bikes' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'It is very convenient method' is incorrect: use 'they are a very convenient mode of transport' or 'they are a very convenient means of transportation'. Also 'due to the traffic jams' is better expressed as 'given the traffic jams' or 'because of traffic jams'.

× Moreover, it is more favorable as well.

✓ Moreover, they are more affordable and convenient as well.

'More favorable' is vague and unidiomatic here. Likely intended meanings are 'more affordable' or 'more convenient'. Also replace singular 'it' with plural 'they' to match 'bikes'. Provide clear adjectives such as 'affordable' and 'convenient' to improve clarity.