Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and redundancy, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, start with a direct answer, then add who gave it and why you liked it. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid filler sounds like “uh.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bright red bicycle when I was about seven, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it felt freeing and helped me make friends.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer opinion with more specific reasons and a linking word to connect ideas. Mention contexts where bikes are or aren’t popular and give a brief example or comparison. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences and use more natural phrases (e.g., “I don’t think they’re very popular” instead of “I don’t think so”).

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or buses, which are more comfortable and often faster for long distances. However, bikes are common in some cities for short trips or among students who want to save money.

× To be honest, uh, when I was a kid, I had a bike, uh, because, uh, I love, I loved riding a bike. So my dad, uh, gifted me, gifted it me.

✓ To be honest, when I was a kid, I had a bike because I loved riding it. My dad gifted it to me.

The sentence mixes present and past tense ('I love, I loved') causing inconsistency. Use past tense to match 'when I was a kid' and 'had a bike'. Also correct word order and pronoun placement: use the object pronoun 'it' and phrasing 'gifted it to me' rather than 'gifted it me'. Remove filler words (uh) for clarity. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (past) and use correct verb + object order: 'My dad gifted it to me.'

× I don't think so, because many individuals use vehicles or public transportation. It is very comfortable and cheaper.

✓ I don't think so, because many people use private vehicles or public transportation. They are more comfortable and cheaper.

The original uses 'It is' to refer to plural ideas ('vehicles or public transportation'), which is a number agreement error and mixes singular pronoun with plural subjects. Also 'individuals' is formal; 'people' is more natural. Use plural pronoun 'They' and comparative structure 'more comfortable and cheaper' or better 'more comfortable and cheaper to use'. Suggestion: Match subject number with pronoun and maintain consistent present tense; write 'They are more comfortable and cheaper' or 'They are more comfortable and less expensive.'