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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a back when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's very popular in my country. Everyone, uh, were rather back in my childhood.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 首先要注意听清并正确重复考官的问题,避免把关键单词听错或读错(例如把 bike 听成/写成 back)。回答时先直接作答,然后提供简短具体的细节,控制在不超过五句内。要使用合适的时态(过去式)和主谓一致,并尽量使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school every day. Because my neighborhood was safe and close to the school, cycling was very convenient for me. I remember learning to ride with my father’s help, which made it a special memory.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答时注意主谓一致和时态的一致性(例如用 are 或 were),并避免含糊的填充词(uh)。先给出直接观点,然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支持观点,使用连接词如 because 或 therefore 来增强逻辑性。细节要具体,如说明在哪些群体或场合特别流行。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in urban areas. Many people use bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and bike-sharing programs have also made cycling more common in recent years.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect word choice / sentence structure (interpreted as Sentence structure errors)

× Did you have a back when you were a child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

句子中使用了“back”显然是错字或误说,本应为“bike”(自行车)。这是句子结构/词汇选择错误,属于句子结构错误(26)。建议复核听写或发音,写作时注意拼写,口语时注意发音清晰以避免将 /baɪk/ 听成 /bæk/。

Third person singular issue

× Yes, it's very popular in my country.

Yes, they're very popular in my country.

原句“It’s very popular” 中的代词“it”与复数名词“bikes”不一致,主语应与复数保持一致,故用“they're”。此为第三人称单数/复数代词使用错误(2)。建议:当指代复数名词时使用复数代词(they/them)并注意动词一致性。

Past tense issue

× Everyone, uh, were rather back in my childhood.

Everyone, uh, was more common in my childhood. / Everyone, uh, rode them a lot in my childhood.

句子有多重问题:1) “Everyone ... were” 主谓不一致,everyone 作主语时动词应为单数过去式“was”(或更自然的表达用“rode them a lot”);2) “rather back” 不是正确搭配,可能想表达“很普遍”或“很常见”,可用“more common”或直接说“rode them a lot”。因此建议改为“Everyone ... was more common” 在语义上也不通,最佳改为“Everyone rode them a lot in my childhood.” 这是过去时和句子结构错误(5 和 26),主要应使用过去式“was/rode”并调整表达以传达“普遍/经常”的意思。建议用更自然的过去时表达,如“I often rode a bike”或“Bikes were very common when I was a child.”

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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