Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar. Avoid fillers (uh, umm) and repetition. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. This was mainly because my family couldn't afford one at the time. As a result, I usually walked or used public transport to get around.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples and organized linking words. Reduce fillers and correct minor grammar (e.g., plural agreement and verb forms). Limit to 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary (commute, recreation, fitness).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for commuting to work because they are cheap and convenient, while others ride for exercise or leisure in parks and along river paths.

× Unfortunately, I don't have the chance to ride the back when I was, when I was a child.

✓ Unfortunately, I didn't have the chance to ride a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' for consistency. Also 'ride the back' is incorrect; use 'ride a bike'. Suggestion: Keep verb tense consistent with the time frame (past) and use the correct noun 'bike'.

× Uh, one of the reason was that unfortunately I umm, we don't have that stable financial, umm, capabilities to, uh, have bought a.

✓ One of the reasons was that, unfortunately, we didn't have stable financial capability to buy one.

'One of the reason' should be plural 'one of the reasons'. The sentence also mixes past and present ('was' vs 'don't have'); use past 'didn't have'. 'Capabilities' is awkward here; 'capability' or 'resources' fits. 'Have bought a' is ungrammatical; use 'to buy one'. Suggestion: Use 'one of the reasons' + past tense + 'we didn't have the financial resources to buy one.'

× Yes it is. I think bikes are very popular in my country because I have seen a lot of people using umm bike for work or as a mode of transportation for work and some of them are using it for doing some exercise or umm just wanna chill or with nature.

✓ Yes, they are. I think bikes are very popular in my country because I have seen a lot of people using bikes for work or as a mode of transportation, and some of them use them for exercise or just to relax and enjoy nature.

'Yes it is' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural; use 'they are'. 'Using umm bike' needs plural 'bikes'. Mixed verb forms: 'have seen' (present perfect) is fine, but then use consistent present simple for habitual actions: 'some of them use them'. Informal 'wanna chill' should be replaced with 'to relax'. Also 'or with nature' is unclear; 'enjoy nature' is better. Suggestion: Match number (plural) and use appropriate formal verbs and phrases for clarity.