Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and unclear phrases, use concise supporting details and correct tense. Mention a brief reason and one specific detail (who could have taught you or when you tried). Use linking words (for example, because, so, however) and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a child because I didn't know how to ride one. For example, my older cousin lived in another town so there was no one to teach me, and my parents were often busy with work. As a result, I only learned to ride much later when I was a teenager.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, reduce fillers (uh, hmm), and organize reasons with linking words. Give one clear specific example (types of deliveries, areas where bikes are used) and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'delivery services choose bikes instead of vans').

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many delivery companies use them for fast, short-distance parcels. For instance, food delivery couriers and small package services mainly use bicycles in city centers, and since motorcycles are not permitted, bicycles are a practical choice.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't drive it.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't ride one.

The verb 'drive' is incorrect for bicycles in English; we use 'ride' for bikes. Also 'it' is less natural than 'one' when referring to a bike. Tense is correct (past simple) so keep past simple verbs.

× Uh, I tried to lend it back.

✓ Uh, I tried to learn how to ride one.

The original sentence 'I tried to lend it back' is illogical in context: 'lend' means to give temporarily, and 'lend it back' suggests returning something you borrowed. The intended meaning is likely 'learn' (acquire the skill). Replace with 'tried to learn how to ride one' to make the sentence coherent and grammatically correct.

× There is there was no one to teach me about how to drive a bike and my parents were also busy with their walks.

✓ There was no one to teach me how to ride a bike, and my parents were also busy with their work.

Use past tense 'There was' to match 'when I was a child'. Remove redundant 'about' and use 'how to ride a bike' (ride for bicycles). 'Drive a bike' is incorrect. 'Walks' is odd here; 'work' or 'jobs' fits better to express parents being busy. Also add a comma before 'and' to join clauses properly.

× Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because most of delivery services choose bikes uh instead of car like van hmm uh, also motorcycles are not allowed in our country so yeah, I do think.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most delivery services use bikes instead of cars or vans. Also, motorcycles are not allowed in our country, so yes, I do think so.

Use 'Yes' for a more natural response. 'Most of delivery services' should be 'most delivery services' (article error/word order). 'Choose' is awkward; 'use' is the usual verb. 'Instead of car like van' is ungrammatical—use 'instead of cars or vans'. Add comma after first clause. 'I do think' is acceptable but 'I do think so' completes the thought. Tenses are present simple and appropriate for general statements.