Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was child and that's my dad bought for me as a birthday gift.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's really popular in my country and I I can always see many people riding to work or to relax. They're on the road and I I'm trying to exercise by biking now.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答较直接但存在语法与表达问题。应注意时态和句子结构(例如:"when I was a child",省略或错误使用冠词和代词)。可增加1-2句具体细节(如车的颜色、喜欢原因或学骑车的经历),并用连词使表达更连贯。控制在不超过五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me as a birthday present, and it was a small blue bicycle with training wheels. I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it made me feel independent, and I learned to ride without help within a few weeks.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答内容相关但有重复和语法错误(例如“I I”、“I I'm”)。句子可以更精确并使用连词衔接观点与例子。建议给出具体场景或数据(如上班族、学生、周末公园),并说明你骑车的频率或目的。保持简洁,最多五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to relax in parks on weekends. I often see crowded bike lanes during rush hour. Personally, I cycle three times a week to stay fit and avoid traffic.
× Yes, I had a bike when I was child and that's my dad bought for me as a birthday gift.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and my dad bought it for me as a birthday gift.
错误类型:过去时和句子结构问题。解释:原句中缺少冠词“a”应为“a child”,并且使用了“that's my dad bought”这种结构不符合英语时态和从句连接方式。应该把两部分用并列连词连接并把宾语代词替换为“it”。另外,“that's”在此不合适,因为要表达过去的事实应直接使用过去时“my dad bought it”。建议:在描述过去事件时,使用一致的过去时;注意使用冠词(a child)和正确的代词(it)。
× Yes, it's really popular in my country and I I can always see many people riding to work or to relax.
✓ Yes, they're really popular in my country, and I can always see many people riding to work or to relax.
错误类型:现在时与代词使用错误。解释:原句中用“it's”指代“bikes”不正确,因bikes为复数,应使用“they're”。此外有重复的“I I”。建议:复数名词用复数代词(they),去掉重复词,保持时态一致。
× They're on the road and I I'm trying to exercise by biking now.
✓ They are on the road, and I'm trying to exercise by biking now.
错误类型:句子结构及重复词。解释:原句中“I I'm”重复且口语化省略需写成“I'm”。另外“They're on the road”可以保留,但应与下一分句用逗号或连词正确连接。建议:删除重复的“I”,保持书面化的缩写形式并用正确的标点连接分句。