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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I had I had the bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I do think that bikes are popular in our country, as in in the Philippines every child owns a bike so and also in our street every child there also have a bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Be direct and natural: give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and one brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition. Use a past simple sentence and add one reason or memory to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember riding it to school and practicing tricks with my friends on weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer concise and avoid filler words and repetition. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, for instance). Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines because many families find them affordable and convenient. For example, most children use bikes to travel short distances and play on the street with friends.

Ngữ pháp

Repetition and sentence structure errors; Subject-verb agreement

× I had I had the bike when I was a child.

I had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence contains a repetition ('I had I had') and an article issue. Corrected by removing the duplicate phrase and using the indefinite article 'a' since the speaker refers to one bike in general, not a specific previously mentioned bike. Also ensure the sentence has a single verb and clear subject. Grammar problem type IDs: 22 (Article errors) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

Plural and subject-verb agreement; article and preposition use; repetition and word order

× I do think that bikes are popular in our country, as in in the Philippines every child owns a bike so and also in our street every child there also have a bike.

I do think that bikes are popular in our country. In the Philippines, almost every child owns a bike, and on our street, every child also has a bike.

This sentence has multiple issues: repetition ('in in'), run-on structure and filler words ('so and also'), incorrect verb agreement ('every child there also have' should be 'has'), and article/preposition placement. Corrections: split into two sentences to improve clarity, remove repeated words, add commas for readability, change 'every child owns a bike' to specify frequency ('almost every' optional) and correct subject-verb agreement to 'has' for 'every child'. Use 'on our street' instead of 'in our street' for natural preposition use. Grammar problem type IDs: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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