Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did, I had a bike and I always use it use it to hang out and go to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think mics are popular in my country. Because. We have our advanced infrastructure, but bikes are easy to get to the destination.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail to enrich the response. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that I used to ride to school and to visit my friends. For example, I would ride it every afternoon to the park, which helped me feel independent and active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Correct pronunciation/word choice and combine short fragments into coherent sentences. Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific reason and a linking word. Include one concrete example or comparison.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For instance, many people use bicycles to commute short distances in cities where roads and bike lanes are well developed.
× Yes I did, I had a bike and I always use it use it to hang out and go to school.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike and I always used it to hang out and go to school.
The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The question asks about past possession ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so actions related to that time should be in the past. Change 'use' to past tense 'used'. Also fix punctuation and remove the duplicated phrase 'use it'. Suggestion: consistently use past tense for events in the past and separate clauses with appropriate punctuation. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× I think mics are popular in my country. Because. We have our advanced infrastructure, but bikes are easy to get to the destination.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because we have advanced infrastructure, and bikes make it easy to get to destinations.
Several issues: 'mics' is a typo and should be 'bikes' (pronoun/word choice error). The sentence fragment 'Because.' should be attached to the main sentence. 'We have our advanced infrastructure' is awkward; 'our' is unnecessary and sounds incorrect in this context. 'Bikes are easy to get to the destination' is incorrect in structure; use 'bikes make it easy to get to destinations' or 'bikes make it easy to reach destinations'. Suggestion: correct the typo, combine fragments into one sentence, remove unnecessary possessive 'our', and use a verb phrase ('make it easy to') with plural 'destinations' for general meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 12