Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I had a bike it has 12 inch wheels and in my child I often with my friend go to park ride ride my back and or.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, no, my town or my town is more town, sorry. Uh, people go outside of every, people often go outside. Inconvenient. So, uh, when people go outside, uh, they can choose.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 首先,回答應直接、清晰且語法正確;其次補充細節時要使用連接詞並給出具體信息(如頻率、地點和感受);最後回答不宜冗長或重複。建議用簡潔的主題句開頭,然後用一到兩句具體描述來豐富內容。例如可以說明自行車的特徵、你常去的地點和一次具體回憶。注意時態一致與句子結構(主語+動詞+賓語),避免片語或單詞重複。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small bike with 12-inch wheels when I was a child. I often rode it to the nearby park with my friends every weekend, and we liked racing each other along the paths. It was a lot of fun and helped me become more confident on two wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答應先給出明確立場(是或不是),然後用一到兩個具體理由支持觀點,並用連接詞連貫句子。避免含糊不清和斷斷續續的表達。可以談論地區差異、交通或基礎設施等具體因素,並用簡潔句子說明頻率或例子。練習時先在腦中構思兩個要點再開始說。
Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my town. The streets are narrow and public transport is convenient, so most people prefer buses or scooters. However, in some rural areas bicycles are still common for short trips because they are cheap and easy to maintain.
× Yes I had a bike it has 12 inch wheels and in my child I often with my friend go to park ride ride my back and or.
✓ Yes, I had a bike. It had 12-inch wheels, and when I was a child I often went to the park with my friend and rode my bike.
存在多处时态和句子结构错误: 1) “it has” 在叙述过去的经历时应使用过去时,改为 “It had”。 2) “in my child” 是错误表达,正确为 “when I was a child”。 3) 动词时态不一致且缺少助动词,“I often with my friend go to park ride ride my back” 需要重组为过去时完整句 “I often went to the park with my friend and rode my bike”。 改进建议:描述过去经历时整个句子保持过去时态,按主语+谓语+宾语的顺序组织,避免词序混乱。
× Uh, no, my town or my town is more town, sorry. Uh, people go outside of every, people often go outside. Inconvenient. So, uh, when people go outside, uh, they can choose.
✓ Uh, no. In my town people often go out, but it's inconvenient, so when people go out they have to choose other transportation.
句子结构混乱、重复且缺少完整表意: 1) “my town or my town is more town” 无意义,应简化为 “In my town people often go out”。 2) “people go outside of every” 片段不完整,改为完整句 “people often go out”。 3) “Inconvenient” 单词作为独立句不完整,应与主句连接,改为 “but it's inconvenient”。 4) 最后一句缺少明确宾语和逻辑关系,改为 “so when people go out they have to choose other transportation”。 改进建议:说话时先确定要表达的完整句子,使用连接词(如 but, so)把短句连接成有逻辑的复合句,避免重复和片段化表达。