Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fix tense consistency. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid unnecessary fillers and spoken hesitations. For example, use past tense for childhood facts and specify frequency or an anecdote to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, my older brother owned one, and I used to borrow it every weekend to ride around the neighborhood, which I really enjoyed.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitations and improve grammar and coherence. Begin with a clear statement, then give two specific supporting details (who, why). Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct plural and article usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. For example, many teenagers prefer bikes because they are cheaper and easier to park, so most of my friends own one and consider buying a bike a common teenage goal.

× No I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but yes my elder brother has 1 and I enjoy riding his bike quite often.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my elder brother had one and I enjoyed riding his bike quite often.

Mixing past and present tenses: the sentence begins with past ('didn't have', 'when I was a child') so the rest should also be in past to maintain temporal consistency. Change 'has 1' to 'had one' and 'enjoy' to 'enjoyed'. Also replace numeral '1' with the word 'one' and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout when describing past situations and avoid numerals in spoken-style sentences.

× Yes uh, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially when it comes to uh young people audience uh, they really enjoy bikes uh, rather than cars.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people; they prefer bikes to cars.

Incorrect preposition and awkward phrasing plus repetition. 'When it comes to young people audience' is ungrammatical: use 'among young people'. 'They really enjoy bikes, rather than cars' is better expressed as 'they prefer bikes to cars.' Also remove filler words 'uh' and simplify. Ensure subject-verb agreement maintained ('people...prefer'). Suggestion: Use 'among' for groups and the pattern 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons.

× Uh, all my friends have have a bike in the every boy dream uh in my country is to buy a bike.

✓ All my friends have a bike; in my country every boy's dream is to buy a bike.

Multiple errors: duplicate word 'have have', incorrect article 'a bike in the every boy dream', and missing possessive in 'every boy's dream'. Split into two clauses for clarity and correct possessive. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Proofread to remove repeated words, use possessive forms for expressions like 'every boy's dream', and separate distinct ideas into separate clauses.