Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác hơn; trả lời nên ngắn gọn, trực tiếp vào câu hỏi (có/không + chi tiết). Tránh lặp từ và lỗi collocation (ví dụ: 'have a bike' vs 'have a car', 'as far as I remember', 'go to school every day'). Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, 1-2 câu bổ sung với chi tiết cụ thể (ai mua, khi nào, tại sao).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight so I could ride to school and visit friends; it was fast and easy to park, which saved me time every day.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa từ vựng và collocation sai ("buys" → "bikes", "transportations" → "means of transport"). Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because, therefore). Tránh mơ hồ và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many students and older people use motorbikes to commute to school or the market since they are easier to park and cheaper to run than cars.

× As far as I remembered, when I was in from school, my parents made the decision to buy a new car for me so as to safeguard my commuting time and effort.

✓ As far as I remember, when I came home from school, my parents decided to buy a new car for me to save commuting time and effort.

The sentence mixes past and present reference incorrectly. Use 'I remember' (present) with a general memory or keep past consistently; here 'As far as I remember' is more natural. 'was in from school' is incorrect word order and verb choice; use 'came home from school' or 'came back from school'. 'made the decision to buy' is wordy; 'decided to buy' is concise and idiomatic. 'so as to safeguard my commuting time and effort' is awkward; use 'to save commuting time and effort' instead. Suggestions: keep tense consistency, use correct verb phrases for movement (come/return), and prefer concise expressions for purpose (to save).

× Therefore, I always choose it to go to school every day like day by day, and the father is so useful and convenient for myself to use it.

✓ Therefore, I always chose it to go to school every day, and the vehicle was very useful and convenient for me to use.

The original mixes present 'always choose' with past context; because the question asked about childhood, use past tense 'always chose'. 'like day by day' is redundant; 'every day' suffices. 'the father' is incorrect noun choice and likely a mistranslation; replace with 'the vehicle' or 'the bike/car' depending on context. 'for myself to use it' is unidiomatic; use 'for me to use' and avoid repeating pronoun and object. Suggestions: match tense to timeframe, remove redundancy, choose correct nouns, and use natural object pronouns. Note: if the intended vehicle was 'bike', replace 'vehicle' with 'bike' or 'car' to match earlier sentence.

× As far as I'm concerned, buys are one of the most common transportations in Vietnam.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, bikes are one of the most common modes of transportation in Vietnam.

There are multiple errors: 'buys' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. 'Transportations' is uncountable in this context; use 'transportation' or better 'modes of transportation'. 'one of the most common' requires a plural noun after 'one of', so 'bikes are one of the most common modes' is correct. Suggestions: correct spelling, use uncountable nouns properly, and use idiomatic collocations like 'modes of transportation'.

× It's evident to see that there are many people, especially elderlies or teenagers, who tend to use cars so as to go to school or just go out to relax their mind and.

✓ It is easy to see that many people, especially the elderly or teenagers, tend to use bikes to go to school or go out to relax.

Problems: 'It's evident to see' is awkward; 'it is easy to see' or 'it is evident that' are better. 'elderlies' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'the elderly'. 'use cars' conflicts with earlier mention of bikes—likely should be 'use bikes'. 'so as to' is formal and unnecessary; 'to' suffices. 'relax their mind and.' is incomplete and unidiomatic; use 'relax' or 'relax their minds'. Suggestions: use correct collective noun 'the elderly', maintain consistency (bikes vs cars), simplify conjunctions, and complete phrases (relax their minds or just relax).