Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: begin with a direct topic sentence, correct age expression, avoid fillers and unclear words, and give specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. Also use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "when I was four" not "at 4").

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a pink bike when I was four. My father bought it for me and it had a white transparent basket where I kept my small purse and toys. I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it made me feel independent and happy.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, use correct grammar and linking words, and give a specific reason and example. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Mention who rides bikes, when, and why, and conclude briefly. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "older people" not "elder people").

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many older people cycle every morning because they believe it is a healthy form of exercise. In addition, students and commuters often use bicycles for short trips since they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes, and I was at 4.

✓ Yes, I was four years old.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and missing words for age expression. Use the pattern 'I was [age] years old' to state age in the past. Also write numbers as words in short sentences: 'four'.

× My father bought me a bike which was of pink color and there was a beautiful parsley, a white transparent basket where I kept my purse or uh, mobile phone or as.

✓ My father bought me a pink bike with a pretty, white transparent basket where I kept my purse or my mobile phone.

Multiple problems: 'which was of pink color' is wordy and unnatural — use adjective before noun: 'a pink bike' (article and adjective order). 'Parsley' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'pretty' or 'pretty basket'. Use 'a pretty, white transparent basket' and place adjectives in correct order (opinion then color). Also repeat 'my' before 'mobile phone' for clarity and remove filler 'or as'.

× Yes, join morning time the elder people rides by each and every day because we think riding a bike in the morning time or else like anytime it is very healthy for the person and it is very.

✓ Yes, in the morning elderly people ride bikes every day because we think riding a bike in the morning or at any time is very healthy for a person.

Several issues: 'join morning time' is incorrect — use 'in the morning'. 'the elder people' should be 'elderly people' or 'older people'. Subject-verb agreement: 'people ride' (not 'rides'). 'rides by' is unnatural; use 'ride bikes'. 'each and every day' is redundant; use 'every day'. Remove filler 'or else like' and finish the adjective phrase: 'is very healthy for a person.' Ensure sentence is complete and coherent.