Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tense and article use, and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a new bike when I was about 10, and I used it to ride to school in Delhi when I was 12. Because it was cheaper and convenient, I usually rode it every day, which helped me become a confident rider.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'riders' or 'motorbikes', 'less expensive'). Use one or two precise examples or comparisons to strengthen your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, motorcycles and scooters are very popular in my country. This is because many middle-class families cannot afford cars, so they choose bikes as a cheaper and more fuel-efficient option. For example, commuters often use scooters to travel quickly through busy city streets and to save on fuel and parking costs.

× I have a bike.

✓ I had a bike.

The question asks about having a bike when the student was a child (past time). Using present tense 'have' is incorrect. Change to past tense 'had' to match the time reference: 'I had a bike.' Suggestion: Pay attention to time markers like 'when I was a child' and switch verbs to past tense accordingly.

× When I was child my father bought a new bike for me.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought a new bike for me.

The phrase requires the definite article 'a' before 'child' ('a child'). Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'a child' not 'child' and punctuate introductory clauses with a comma.

× When I was 12 years old I went to school Delhi on bike and that's what why my father bought this for me.

✓ When I was 12 years old, I rode my bike to school in Delhi, and that's why my father bought it for me.

Multiple issues: need comma after introductory time clause; use 'rode' (past tense of ride) rather than 'went...on bike'; include preposition 'in' before 'Delhi'; phrase 'that's what why' is incorrect — use 'that's why'; refer to the bike with pronoun 'it' instead of 'this'. Suggestion: Use natural past-tense verbs ('rode'), correct prepositions ('in Delhi'), and proper relative phrases ('that's why').

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country, every middle class person that cannot afford expensive vehicles such as cars and they usually use bike for their daily use and biker less expensive than cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many middle-class people who cannot afford expensive vehicles such as cars usually use bikes for daily transportation because bikes are less expensive than cars.

Original sentence is run-on and contains several errors: split into two sentences for clarity; use 'Many middle-class people' rather than 'every middle class person'; use 'who' for people, not 'that'; use plural 'bikes' and 'are less expensive' to compare; 'use bikes for daily transportation' is more natural than 'use bike for their daily use'. Suggestion: Break long sentences, use correct relative pronoun 'who', maintain number agreement, and choose natural collocations ('daily transportation').