Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is brief and direct, which is good, but you can improve by adding one or two supporting details to make it more natural and informative. Use a topic sentence followed by specific details (when you had the bike, what kind it was, or a short memory). Keep it within 1–3 sentences and use linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I rode it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because it was light and easy to handle, I learned to balance quickly and still remember those rides fondly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains pronunciation and grammar issues. First, correct pronunciation of 'bikes' and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words such as 'because', 'for example', or 'so'. Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters and students cycling, and in rural areas families use bikes to run errands, so they remain a common mode of transport.

× I think bites are popular in my country 'cause uh, I should have wise.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because, uh, I should have one.

The original sentence contains several word-choice and form errors. 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes' (incorrect lexical choice). 'cause' is informal; use 'because' for clarity. 'I should have wise' appears to be incorrect word selection and form; based on context the intended meaning is likely 'I should have one' (meaning I should have a bike). These are errors in the use of adjectives/adverbs and general word choice; replacing incorrect words with the correct nouns/pronouns and using 'because' makes the sentence grammatical and clear. Suggestion: proofread for correct vocabulary (bike vs. bite) and use complete words (because) and correct pronouns/objects (one) to match meaning.