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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course I have. I had a bike when I'm I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course people like bikes in weekend to enjoy the time riding bike on on side or lake and enjoy the wind and the sunshine to engage with each other.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Be concise, grammatically correct, and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Add one brief supporting detail if helpful. Example improvements: start with “Yes, I did.” then add a short detail like when or what type of bike. Keep answer to 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/so/therefore). Correct grammar and word order, and avoid repetition. Mention concrete places or activities to make your answer specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially on weekends. For example, many families ride along riverside paths or around lakes because it is a pleasant way to exercise and spend time together in the sunshine.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, of course I have.

Yes, of course I did.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the response should use the past tense. Using 'have' is present-tense; replace with 'did' to match the past context. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past situations, e.g. 'I did' or 'I had.'

Sentence structure errors

× I had a bike when I'm I was a child.

I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence contains a fragment 'I'm' mistakenly inserted, breaking the sentence structure and creating tense inconsistency. Remove the extra 'I'm' to form the correct past-time clause 'when I was a child.' Suggestion: Read sentences aloud to spot extra words and ensure subordinate clauses match the main clause tense.

Present tense issue

× Of course people like bikes in weekend to enjoy the time riding bike on on side or lake and enjoy the wind and the sunshine to engage with each other.

Of course people like bikes on weekends to enjoy riding along riversides or lakes, feeling the wind and sunshine and interacting with each other.

Multiple issues: 'in weekend' is incorrect preposition and number (use 'on weekends'); 'like' can stay present for general habit (present simple correct); phrase 'to enjoy the time riding bike' is unnatural—use 'to enjoy riding' and include article 'a' if singular 'a bike' or make it general 'riding'; 'on on side or lake' likely means 'along riversides or lakes' and had a duplicated 'on'; 'enjoy the wind and the sunshine to engage with each other' mixes infinitive wrongly. The corrected sentence uses present simple for habitual action, correct prepositions, plural 'weekends', natural verb forms and clearer nouns. Suggestion: Use 'on weekends' for habitual actions, 'ride' or 'ride a bike/riding' for the gerund, and choose clear location phrases like 'along riversides or lakes.'

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