Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike I got. I get it when I was 10.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 句子時態和語法有錯誤,需要使用過去式並且組織成更自然的回答。建議先用主題句直接回答,然後用一兩句具體細節(例如你什麼年齡、誰給的、車子長什麼樣)來豐富內容,同時保持總句數不超過五句。還應使用連接詞如“so/and/when”使語意連貫。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was ten, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, so I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答過於簡短且有主謂一致錯誤(bikes 應用複數)。建議先直接回應(Yes, they are/No, they aren't),然後給出一到兩個具體理由或例子,如騎車的人群、用途或城市基礎設施,並使用連接詞(for example/because/so)來擴展回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, they are. Many people use bicycles for short trips and commuting because traffic can be heavy, and several cities have built bike lanes to encourage cycling. For example, students and delivery workers often travel by bike in my town.
× Yes, I have a bike I got. I get it when I was 10.
✓ Yes, I had a bike. I got it when I was 10.
问题类型:过去时错误。分析:学生想表达过去拥有一辆自行车,应使用一般过去时而不是现在时或混合时态。“I have a bike I got.” 中的“have”是现在时,不符合“when you were a child”的背景;“I get it when I was 10.” 使用了现在时“get”与过去时间“was 10”冲突。修改建议:将主句和时间状语从句都改为一般过去时,分别使用“had”和“got”。如果要强调现在仍然有,可以说“I have a bike that I got when I was 10.”(我有一辆在我10岁时得到的自行车)。建议练习:多注意时间状语(过去时间)时动词应使用过去时,结合常用时间词(when I was, last year, in 2005 等)判断时态。
× Yes, it is.
✓ Yes, they are.
问题类型:主谓一致错误。分析:问题是“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?” 主语是复数名词“bikes”,所以回答中代词和系动词需与之保持复数形式。学生回答“Yes, it is.” 使用了单数代词“it”与单数系动词“is”,与复数主语不一致。修改建议:将代词和系动词改为复数形式“Yes, they are.” 或者更自然地回答“Yes, bicycles are.”。建议练习:回答关于复数名词的问题时,确认代词(they)和动词(are)使用复数形式。