Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan ve açık, ancak daha akıcı ve tam cümleler kullanmanız gerekiyor. Gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden (“like”, “that was”) kaçının ve bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp ardından kısa destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Ayrıca maksimum beş cümle kuralına uyun ve bitişi net yapın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had my first bike when I was four years old. It was a small pink bike with training wheels, which my parents bought for me. I remember riding it in the park near our house and feeling very proud when I learned to pedal by myself.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısını düzene sokun ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin. Konuşmada dolgu seslerinden (“uh”, “yours”) kaçının; bunun yerine bağlaçlar kullanarak iki nedeni net şekilde belirtin. Daha spesifik örnekler veya kısa karşılaştırmalar ekleyin. Maksimum beş kısa cümleyle fikirlerinizi düzenleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. One reason is that cars are very expensive to buy and maintain. Another reason is that public transport is reliable, so many people choose cycling for short trips instead of using private cars.

× Yes, I had my first bike when I was like 4 years old.

✓ Yes, I had my first bike when I was about 4 years old.

'Like' is informal and vague in this context; 'about' is a more appropriate word to indicate an approximate age. Use of 'had' is correct for past tense.

× I had that pink bike that was.

✓ I had a pink bike like that.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'that was,' causing a sentence fragment. Reordering to 'I had a pink bike like that' completes the idea and creates a grammatical sentence.

× Yours is actually very popular in my country cause cars are too expensive to buy and public transport is working good in my country so people prefer to uh, take a bike or use the public transportation inside of cars.

✓ Bicycles are actually very popular in my country because cars are too expensive to buy and public transport does not work well, so people prefer to ride a bike or use public transportation rather than travel by car.

Multiple issues: 'Yours' is the wrong pronoun; use 'Bicycles' or 'They'. 'cause' should be 'because'. 'working good' is incorrect; use 'does not work well' or 'works poorly'. 'take a bike' is informal; 'ride a bike' is better. 'use the public transportation inside of cars' is unclear and incorrect; 'use public transportation rather than travel by car' conveys intended meaning. Overall sentence structure needed reorganization for clarity and grammar.