Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevaplarınızın zaman uyumuna ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin. Geçmişten bahsederken 'didn't have' doğru ama baştaki 'I don't have' yanlış zaman kullanımı; onu kaldırın. Daha doğal ve kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun (örneğin 'No, I didn't.'). Ardından kısa bir açıklama ve gerekirse nedenini ekleyin. Ayrıca 'I wanted to buy someone' ifadesi hatalı; muhtemelen 'I wanted to buy one' ya da 'I wanted to buy a bike' demek istediniz. Cümle sayısını 2-3 ile sınırlayın ve bağlaçlar (because, so, but) kullanarak akışı sağlayın.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wanted to buy one, but my parents couldn't afford it, so I often rode my friend's bike instead.

Gợi ý: Daha net bir konu cümlesi kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın. 'I like, I think' gibi dolgu ifadelerden kaçının. Destekleyici detay verirken daha spesifik örnekler kullanın (örneğin şehirlerdeki kullanım, ulaşım veya eğlence amacı). Ayrıca 'they like drawing, drawing it' ifadesi anlamsız; muhtemelen 'they like riding them' demek istediniz. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many families buy them for their children for recreation and short trips. For example, in my city, you can see many people cycling to the market or school, especially on weekends.

× I don't have.

✓ I didn't have one.

The conversation refers to the past (when you were a child). Using present tense 'don't have' is incorrect. Replace with past simple 'didn't have'. Also 'a bike' was omitted; use 'one' or 'a bike' to make the object explicit. Suggestion: say 'I didn't have a bike.'

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is already correct for past tense and matches the question about childhood. No change needed other than consistency with surrounding sentences. Keep past simple for a completed past state.

× I wanted to buy someone.

✓ I wanted to buy one.

'Someone' is a pronoun used for people, not objects. The speaker intended to refer to 'a bike', so use 'one' or repeat 'a bike'. Suggestion: 'I wanted to buy a bike' or 'I wanted to buy one.'

× Yeah, I like, I think bikes are popular in my country because every child has a bike and they like drawing, drawing it.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many children have bikes and they like drawing them.

The filler 'I like' is unnecessary and awkward here; remove it. 'Every child' is an overgeneralization; 'many children' or 'most children' is more natural. Use plural 'bikes' and plural pronoun 'them' to refer back to bikes. 'Drawing, drawing it' is repetitive and uses singular 'it'; change to 'drawing them.' Also maintain present simple for general statements (bikes are popular).