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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid. I got it from my mom.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Especially shared bikes. And I think the reason why it's popular is that it's super cheap.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 答题直接且意义明确,但可以更自然和具体。建议在开头用完整的主题句(例如“Yes, I did.”),随后用一两句补充细节——描述自行车的类型、你当时的感受或和谁一起骑,以增加内容深度。同时注意句子连贯,避免重复“had a bike/was a kid”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my mother bought me for my seventh birthday, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood every afternoon. It had a basket on the front and felt very special because my friends didn’t have one like it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答点明观点但结构松散且过于简短。建议先给出完整的主题句(例如“Yes, they are.”),然后用连接词(such as “mainly because”/“for example”)补充两到三条具体原因(如便宜、环保、出行方便),并可以举例说明共享单车的使用场景以增强说服力。注意句子连贯不要断裂成片段。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular, especially shared bicycles. Mainly because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips in the city; for example, many people use them to commute to work or run quick errands, which also helps reduce traffic and pollution.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Especially shared bikes.

Especially shared bikes are popular.

该句为不完整句(片语残缺),缺少谓语动词。原句只是一个片语,无法独立表达完整意思。建议在句中加入谓语,例如“are popular”或将其与前句合并:“I think bikes are popular, especially shared bikes.” 这样句子就完整且与上下文衔接。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And I think the reason why it's popular is that it's super cheap.

And I think the reason why they're popular is that they're very cheap.

原句中先前谈论的复数名词是“bikes/ shared bikes”,但使用了单数代词“it”与“it's”,造成指代不一致。应使用复数代词“they”和相应的复数动词形式“are”。另外,口语中“super cheap”可以改为更中性的“very cheap”。建议注意代词与先行词的数一致,复数名词用“they are”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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