BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in your country, My country.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Bạn lặp câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời; hãy trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Giữ dưới 5 câu, sử dụng từ nối nếu thêm thông tin (ví dụ: "because", "so", "but"). Chú ý ngữ pháp (dùng thì quá khứ) và tránh lặp lại lời của người hỏi.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because the roads near our home were quiet, I felt safe practicing there, so I became quite confident riding by the time I was ten.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hiện tại ngắn và có lỗi (nhầm lẫn "your" và "my"). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, mở rộng bằng một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Tránh câu quá ngắn; thể hiện vốn từ vựng liên quan (ví dụ: "commuting, recreation, environment").

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially for short commutes and leisure. Many people prefer cycling because it’s cheap and good for the environment, and in some cities there are dedicated bike lanes which make cycling safer.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The sentence repeats the question phrase 'Did you' twice, creating a redundancy and breaking sentence structure. Remove the duplicated phrase so there is a single auxiliary verb 'Did' followed by the subject 'you' and the base form 'have'. Suggestion: read your sentence aloud and delete accidental repeated words; ensure one auxiliary verb per question in past simple.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in your country, My country.

Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student incorrectly uses the second-person possessive 'your' then switches to 'My' with incorrect capitalization, causing a pronoun reference error and inconsistency. Use the first-person possessive 'my' to refer to the student's country and keep capitalization standard. Suggestion: decide the speaker perspective (I/my) and keep pronouns consistent; use lowercase 'my' unless starting a sentence.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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