Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unnatural phrasing. For example, say whether you had a bike, explain the reason in past tense, and give a brief result or feeling.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My mother was worried about my safety, so she didn't allow me to ride one. As a result, I learned to enjoy other activities like swimming and reading instead.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and avoid filler words. Use correct vocabulary and plural/singular forms. Start with a direct opinion, then give specific evidence or an example using linking words. Correct common words (children, people, bikes) and provide short, coherent sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children and adults cycle to school or work, especially in residential neighborhoods, because it is cheap and convenient.

× No I didn't. I haven't tried a bike when I was a child due to my mother concern about my safety as her precious child.

✓ No, I didn't. I hadn't tried riding a bike when I was a child because my mother was concerned about my safety as her precious child.

The original mixes present perfect ('I haven't tried') with a specific past time ('when I was a child'), which is incorrect; use past perfect ('I hadn't tried') or simple past depending on context. Also 'tried a bike' is unnatural; 'tried riding a bike' or 'ridden a bike' is correct. 'Mother concern' lacks possessive and needs 'was concerned' to match past tense. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to that past period in past forms and use 'riding' after 'tried' or use 'rode/ridden'.

× Uh, yes, I think so. You can see a lot of child, uh, rude, uh rude, uh, Pike in the street or in the road.

✓ Uh, yes, I think so. You can see a lot of children and many bikes in the streets or on the road.

'A lot of child' is wrong; use plural 'children' after quantifiers. The filler 'rude' seems to be an attempt at 'road' or mispronunciation and 'Pike' should be 'bike.' Use 'a lot of' + plural noun ('children') and 'many bikes' for countable items. Prepositions: use 'in the streets' or 'on the road' consistently. Suggestion: pronounce words clearly and use correct plural forms and collocations ('a lot of children', 'many bikes', 'on the road').