Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I got my first bike when I was 7 and uh, I would struggle to keep my balance first, so it took me quite a long time to learn how to ride. My older brother helped me practice every day and finally I learned how to ride. I felt very proud.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, because bike is convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答总体自然且信息明确,但存在语音填充词(如 “uh”)和部分语句重复或冗长。为提升得分,建议: 1) 去掉填充词,使表述更流畅; 2) 控制句子数量与长度(最多5句),首句直接回应问题,随后用1–2句具体细节支撑; 3) 使用连接词(例如: at first, eventually, because)让叙述更连贯; 4) 增加一两个具体细节(例如练习时的情景或感受)以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes. I got my first bike when I was seven. At first I struggled to keep my balance, so it took a while to learn. My older brother practiced with me every day, and eventually I could ride confidently, which made me very proud.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短,缺乏支撑细节和连接词。为提高分数,建议: 1) 首句直接回答(Yes/No)后用1–2句具体理由或例子支持观点; 2) 使用连接词(for example, because, therefore)使论述更清晰; 3) 提供具体场景或比较(例如通勤、环保、健身或与开车/公共交通的比较)来展示词汇和思考深度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. They are convenient for short trips and commuting in crowded cities, and many people also cycle for exercise. For example, I often see commuters using bikes to avoid traffic and save time.
× Yeah, because bike is convenient.
✓ Yeah, because bikes are convenient.
原句中使用了可数名词“bike”但没有冠词或复数形式,导致用法不正确。讲一般事实或普遍情况时,应使用复数形式表示该类事物(“bikes are”),或使用不定冠词(“a bike is”)来指单个。例如此处回答关于“骑自行车是否流行”,应表达“自行车整体上很方便”,因此用复数“bikes are convenient”。此外,原句中缺少主谓一致(单数名词与复数谓语不匹配),改为复数后谓语也需用“are”。